Reviews for Time Capsule
Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
man, what a beautiful story! that dress! of course! OMG. this is incredible. the whole reflection on the post Buu saga and renewing their vows was just so terrific.
Queen Hady chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
This was really Nice
k.i.3.r.a chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
this was great. i think it was the perfect amount of sap from vegeta. it would be too much for the show now but as vegeta gets older he dose express feelings more so it works. also i love the part with trunks, lol!
ladyg228 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Great one shot! You did a great job writing a sensitive veggie. He wasn't too OOC and I loved the ending with trunks. The dialogue between trunks and vegeta was awesome
lovelylovablevee chapter 1 . 6/24/2017
Your Vegeta is too damn sensitive. I don't see what the big deal was with Bulma keeping her dress. Also, the way he speaks is far too common for a Prince. He sounds nothing like Vegeta on the show:(
But anyway, I wonder What would've happened if Bra found boxes containing Vegeta and Bulma's sex toys... I would've loved to see Vegeta's reaction to that. Lol.
nancy103 chapter 1 . 6/18/2017
Loved Trunks in this story!
Astral Dragon Spirit chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
I really enjoy reading your relationship stories for the Briefs family.