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Scarecrow94 chapter 1 . 7/7 Thank you |
Guest chapter 22 . 6/19 Little dark irony aside .Fred is spot on some moms never trip to it .Sad really and a bit funny .ThankYou as always |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/14 I think you need to be made aware of a time honored and extremely true saying: "No pain, No gain." Your version has gained EVERYTHING just dropped in his lap. You now have two possible versions of a story. He could go charging in like a bull in a china shop and screw up the entire world. Or, he could become a power hungry megalomaniac with delusions of godhood. Either could be written believably. I'm afraid anything that tries to split the difference becomes IMMEDIATELY unbelievable for me at least and very uninteresting. I'm afraid I'm not very interested in reading the two believable possibilities. The stories where he screws up his wishes, badly, have very real funny possibilities, however. |
Ronin Kenshin chapter 10 . 6/14 this fic has good ideas but its hard to follow a few chapters ago you said he was 4th year now hes 5th and if so why didn't he wish people knew he wasn't lying about voldy think you should go back reread and edit this has lots of potential either way good work |
Guest chapter 21 . 5/8 Well who knew Ginny was a size poor sod sore and figuratively knocked up .Gotta love irony .Once again great tale and will always read any of your stellar please no wait that's Ginnys line .I'll just say ThankYou |
marcinkrycki2314 chapter 1 . 5/4 I started with expectations and i am gone without hope. Sorry but i'm a selfish person and these wishes in my eyes are so retarded it hurts my heart with few expections. The most idiotic was apperence option... propably 2 or 3 of them would be killed in real situation or at least stunned and interogated considering current situation in their world. And if their apperence will be accepted because of the orbs power then i would rather kill myself then read this novel as i hate ROB/mind and memory modification. |
Fallow56 chapter 19 . 3/11 xxxx Kudos xxxx : ) |
roon0 chapter 6 . 3/12 So thats, that and Luna will marry Harry. Will Hermione be stuck with that oaf Ron? |
roon0 chapter 5 . 3/12 Harry is a typical boy. I cannot think the Dursley's were ever that hard up, they manage to spend a fortune on Dudley. |
roon0 chapter 3 . 3/12 I love your story |
roon0 chapter 2 . 3/12 Harry is wasting no time. |
roon0 chapter 1 . 3/12 I want one of those orbs. Why didn't Harry wish for his own home? |
JoshuaLifeheart chapter 18 . 3/11 at this point there are a lot of inconsistencies with previous chapters. we, as readers of your story, know two of Harry's patronuses, but Harry knows what a patronus is and what it does, so there is no reason for him to ask questions of a patronus we don't see him having. it's very inconsistent and seems like a team wrote it, but didn't read each others chapters before posting. |
TheHuntresss chapter 7 . 1/6 Ok Harry's wishes wished all his friends (he named them) got wands without trace on them so they'd have their tracesless wands by now and if i recall correctly Neville was one of those friends. 2. The Horcruxes - Sirius brought in the locket weeks ago so they should have all been destroyed. (it also doesn't make sense that their alarms would be triggered by a memory since the memory wouldn't emit the same aura I also think that marriage is extremely premature for a 14 and 13 year old.. but since I've read soul bond stories having Harry married at 11 I'll not say a lot more about that. |
lonewolf420 chapter 5 . 1/5 Ok you messed up a bit. Sirius have the locket to the bank and they promised to summon and destroy the rest which would take a few days. It's been two weeks of Harry is free from his family for the rest of the summer so all the rest should be fine by now. Only one the bank should have detected would be one in his scare but wish got rid of that one. So why they still haven't done what they told Sirius they would weeks ago? |