Please update soon

This is interesting.

Okay, I know it's been a year and it's just one chapter, but I am BEGGING you to update. I just found this story and got so so excited reading it, it's such a fun concept. Stories with this premise can often come out silly and cracky, but you've put real, earnest thought into Shegos motives for going along with this plan, and it's actually a good plan, but it's still ridiculous and entertaining enough to be a classic Drakken plan.

Shego is so smart and awesome in this, so self serving and sensible but cold and callous - the characterization in just excellent. You've got a great grasp on her character, and on the rapport she has with Drakken, which makes me think you'll have a great grasp on Kim and Ron's characters and speaking manner, too.

I want to see Shego go to school with them so bad! Pretending to be Kim's friend, getting into trouble, slowly conquering the world with her prior knowledge, saving the world a time or two, maybe even joining the cheer squad? Pretty pretty please that be awesome and hilarious. Imagine Shego interacting with Bonnie!

The best KP fics are the ones that dive a little deeper, make the world, the characters and the situation darker - but still balance that with adventure, humour and fun. This is not easy to do (I've tried) but you make it seem easy. Love the chapter, page is bookmarked, and I will be so happy to read more of this if you ever choose to update :) xoxo

itneresting story please update it soon curious to see where this goes

Very interesting. I'll look forward to how this turns out should you choose to update.

Bravo

From a mechanics point of view, I'd like to suggest that you look at the series of stories done by BearSent176 where they replace Kim and Ron with new versions of Kim and Ron BUT instead of rereading newish versions of the episodes, you only see them between episodes. That connected them to the actual episodes without them rehashing/retelling each one. If you should replace Kim or Ron with Shego then it gets a bit trickier in the amount that gets retold.

Howver you do it, I wish you and your muse a fruitful partnership.

Hmm, I have seen this plot before, but the way you set up it could border to a too large project with a lot of rehashing of season 1-3. This can be hard to make reader-friendly

Also Shego must be on peak murderous Shego here, so one must assume that idea to simply just kill Kim, as suggested before in the show, is considered by Shego, there would be a certain delight for her to intimately kill Kim mere weeks after she have been nearly killed 5 times over by Kim.

Now there are plenty of time-paradoxial reasons to why that cant happen , but those are already challenging her get rich scheme, and its hard to see Shego not just betting on that she can get her well-deserved revenge and become the world richest teenager.
Again plenty of reasons to it may not happen, but the sentiment must be there.

Futhermore while I always pegged Shego as someone to remember something from the couple extra time-personalities she has in the collapsed timeline, I find it a stretch to claim that her comment about hating timetravels is suggesting she have traveled more in time than Ron, who said timetravel is a cornucopia of disturbing concepts.

That said its not bad written, Im just doubtful it will be completed or will end satisfactory.