soo thw aniki is kanji.. auto love

Makoto x Kirigiri

Danganronpa
Makoto x Naegi

This is great, I’ve been looking for a good Persona fic that incorporates the aspects/lore of the other entries in the series. You have a really on point style of writing, and I really look forward to seeing where this goes. Remember to pace yourself, and keep up the good work!

Good to see you're still working on the story, I look forward to reading the updated chapters! And the subsequent new ones!

I'm confused as to why Caroline and Justine aren't Lavenza if Real Igor is in charge of the Velvet Room at this point in this fic. Fantastic story by the way, I can't wait to see where it goes.

Well despite me reading this about two weeks ago, and with my goal to actually review more, rather than just faving stories. This is over-due.

I'm pretty new to the Persona Fandom and this was one of the first fanfics I read here, nd boy does it hold up as one of the best. I appeciate like how not only did you give Makoto more Agency early on but did it such a believable way.

Very curious to see where things go. I have a few theories, such as about Igor.

Few grammar errors here and there, and I've come across Akira a few times still but very well written overall.

Is it odd in how I see Sae's palace playing out? With Ren just poking at Shadow Sae with the lack of Makoto or the Ayanami's (or something like how they should never be seeing this place of hers)

Sorry that you're done with this story or that it's the last chapter you'd be doing. But maybe I'll be taking over the rest of your work from here sometime, in a more middle-school like type of way. After all, you and the other authors were doing your own retellings of Persona 5 before even I could do it!

Oh, man. I was gonna do the retelling of Persona 5, but look likes you and the other authors beat me to it!

FUCKING PHONE BULLSHIT SEND BUTTON!

*coughs into fist* Ahem my apologies just my last review got sent early due to, ...Issues..., anyways what I was saying is if you were planning on having Katsumi be Ren's little sister then by the will of Igor P5R must feel like a sucker punch to the gut considering who Katsumi actually is in the game huh? Either way hope that doesn't discourage you from making the most game accurate AU you can for this fic, best of luck and can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm guessing "Sumi" is short for "Katsumi", am I right? If so and your saying in this Katsumi is Ren's little sister then P5R must

what do you go by on AO3?

the same thing happened to me, i can’t see chapter 13.

I got an email saying that this was updated with a 13th chapter but after checking on the app and in the browser there is still only 12, was this an error on fanfiction part?