Simply astonishing!

Everything written seems to have been planned, with nothing unnecessary. There's a reason for all that happens in this story. I love Lars, I love Blue Zircon and Yellow Zircon. All the OCs you've introduced in this story feel so organically implemented. The world building you've done for the SU universe feels true to canon.

Self-indulgent fic writing creates whacky worlds which seem to connect with me—and this fic is no exception. The third act has me hyped for what's to come.

Side note, I absolutely love the entire concept of Cherry. It never hit me of a gem having mystic powers which they shouldn't have would be a defect, but it certainly makes sense! I really hope to see her eventually interact with Garnet; that would be a conversation I would love to see!

I love this story!

Easily the best Steven Universe fic I've found yet. I love all these characters and rebels you've created - they feel so true to the lore. And poor Zircon can never catch a break. This has been an awesome ride.

Holy hell I'm shipping 'em now.

Well, a species that only needs alcohol to live?
Are we SURE this isn't some humanity spin off in this universe? Maybe that's why all the humans are so peace and love like, everyone else who wasn't for nothing but love got sent away and split into a different species.
I think I'm going to leave with em, if there's one thing I don't like about Steven Universe... It's the animation errors, but if there's a second, it would be how fricking left it is.
Jeez, your making me like the Angry Birds movie(which is very mediocre) simply because it's one of the few things I can find with a right wing agenda that isn't full of Klansmen and Nazis.

I almost /never/ leave a comment/review/whatever you wanna call it, but I just wanna say this–I started reading this this morning and I just finished it (well, to ch29, of course. I know it isn't finished) in the lateish afternoon. I love this and can't wait for the next chapter!

GOD BLESS LARS THE SPACE PIRATE

Auuuughbdjdjsjskjsje why did you have to TORMENT me and my lawyer wife like this?! She didn’t deserve it! Also you keep ending on the most banger cliffhangers like 100% A job you leave me wanting more! This is one of my ALL TIME FAV fics of any fandom! If you wrote a suspense/thriller/action novel it’d be a best seller in no time!

The characters are amazing and they feel alive, they all have great chemistry, and the characters you got from the show are near identical to their counterpart. You captured their personality with what little time they had from the show and you transformed them into simple and likable characters.

That being said, i feel like you could improve on how you write the characters' emotions. It feels like the parts where suppose to feel the turmoil or happiness in the characters is summed up in a couple lines or so. Sometimes keeping them short does work in the setting, but it seems like you're used to being dialogue heavy. There's nothing wrong with that, but the readers can relate themselves more into the characters if you add a bit more lines showing what they're thinking and how they're feeling.

I hope you get to read this and improve your already great writing skills. :)

FUCK YEAH AQUAMARINE GOT WASTED
FUCK AQUA AURA’S BACK

Dayuuum. You sure know how to make a good cliffhanger.

I was eager to see them finally leave, but it was nice seeing Aquamarine in all her... charm. You did a good job keeping her character.

But seeing Double A Quartz again, I can only imagine the fallout between Blue and Yellow at this point.

I'm on board like a super-glue enthusiast cheating at a surf competition.

This is literally one of the best Steven Universe Fanfic I've ever read! Considering that you're not focusing on the shows main crew and being able to pull it off is amazing! The way you write the zircons and other rebels is a fantastic blend of creativity and I feel like your ocs are PART of the show itself! The peridots are adorable and are my favorite, Cranberry and Raspberry are precious gem lesbians that are too good for home world, Ruby is such an intriguing defect and Aqua Pearl is the special kind of trouble I need in their rag tag oddity of a group! All of them being together has great chemistry and I keep smiling within their every interaction in the story. Especially Yellow Zircon, possibly being addictive to uncontrollable motion rides (looks like someone is going to have fun on amusement Parks ;) ) I can't wait for them to get to earth! And you brought Aquamarine! MY PRECIOUS BLOO BERRY (So many people hate her and I'm one of the few who doesn't :')) she's my favorite psycho bitch in the series haha)

Honestly I've finished every chapter and I'm yearning for more. The 27the chapter is literally on a whole nother level. I was slackjawed about the whole peridot shards, my poor sweetheart 5XU breaking down and my bloo lawyer being somewhat responsible for it :(( And the part with Aquamarine!

Honestly I have two theories , it could either be that Aqua is desperate enough to capture them, especially Zircon, to compensate to Yellow D who's on a killing spree, shattering gems who've come in contact with Rose and it seemingly looks like Aqua is the number one target since she's the one who brought Steven to Home world.

My second theory, which I'm hopelessly praying to happen, Aquamarine gets confused and is mentally scared of the consequences about the whole rose quartz ordeal. I feel like maybe Topaz had proposed the idea to flee to earth with her to which she quickly dismissed but had second thoughts and hesitantly followed Topaz. I can totally see her scaring the crew for a little bit before coming out and asking (RUDELY) to come along with them since she's Aquamarine after all xD I'm hoping for the latter but it's your story and I will respect for whatever upcoming shitstorm next chapter!

You need more views man.. You're a terrific writer! Also does this story have a sequel? If so FUCC DAS AWESOME

Aw fuck it's AM.

got fuxking damn it aQuAmArInE

I was kind of looking forward to a 'monument to your sins' kind of moment with Zircon, since she's neck-deep in everything going down.

And lemme take a moment to admire how... Steven Universe this story feels. The story is compelling and deep when it tries, the characters are quirky and interesting, and I never forget this is Steven Universe.

I prey you update more often. 7.7