DANG!

S's? umm... okay?

Pretty good, just one question, will there be a second book? I don't want this to end. And if there is, can you give us a sneak peak? I mean you don't have to, but it'd be greatly appreciated.

Please tell me you put John in the story, please. You remember him.

Thanks man! And you spelled my name right! This is getting good.

Don't worry he's coming back. I'm sure of it.

well okay. i bet its worth the wait so i shall continue to wait patiently

Fantastic chapter but i would recommend making your chapters a bit longer, don't get me wrong the story is good but I feel like all these chapters are to short something I've see in some Fanfics and i just feel that's just lazy writing

P.S : I mean no disrespect in any way dude I'm just making a observation and helping you improve your story.

I like this entire thing, just one complaint, could you maybe space the dialogue apart?

good, not food

It's not my fault. it's been so long since I've seen RWBY, and I'm not food with spelling names. But thanks for pointing that out Driver.

you should check the names, or is it you intention to call Weiss wiess umd Jaune Juane?

ace has guts to walk down to the washing machine in his boxers. ill give him that