I love this story.
The characters were great and no oc ness

I didnt like it, I LOVED IT! I loved everything abd I lived the idea of the Slice of death and the Blood bond ( im not even sure if it exists ) Incredible

this made me incredibly happy

ughhhhh the truth is such a frustration! you write this so beautifully

Shampoo's change of heart seems far too sudden and unexplained. Some elaboration would be nice. Also, Shampoo would need clothes after beging transformed back into human form.

In addition, I would think Nabiki would be a bit more sharp in her tone and cutting in her remarks to Ranma - equally helpful, but not overly kind.

Oh my! Ukyo has arrived! I like the touch of angst in the story, which evens out the mush. However, I think Ranma might have a little bit more confidence in himself - he can be rather cocky. Although, it is also a way for him to hide his own inner insecurities. I imagine you forced them to an American style ceremony because you were unfamilar with how modern Japanese weddings are. The story might sound smoother if you did some research and made the wedding like a realistic, small private ceremony would take place in Japan.

Just needs a little work to make the sentence structure a little smoother and easier to read. Otherwise, not too shabby.

I'm eager to find out how you resolve the story.

I should probably wait till I'm done reading to write a review, but your little "I hope it doesn't suck" prompted me to write one anyway. In case you still care... it doesn't suck. At all. It may be because I'm really tired right now, but I haven't noticed any technical errors. No one seems blatantly OOC. And the quality of the storytelling is nothing to sneeze at.

Hehe the first two chapters I was telling a friend of mine "this should be labeled drama and not romance" T T I even cried. But those further chapters made up for all my crying . I love your fic; you're an awsome writer, the descriptions, the atmosphere, the suspense you hold it so well it's amazing I think I'll go on and read some of you're other fics, they must be all really good well thank you for posting this fic up, it was a real pleasure.

The letter to the old man was a nice touch. It was a good way to bring closure to the whole thing and had the added bonus of you mentioning a new arrival in the Saotome household. Yay! Ranma will make such a cute dad and Akane will be an awesome mom. Mayhaps there's a sequel in there somewhere?
Anyway, awesome job! I loved it. I really did. (Even if it did seem like torture at times. But you know how we fanficcers are. Masochists at heart, we like to see the worst of the worst because it makes the best so much better. I think it's just part of the psychosis. ;D)
Thanks for the awesome story and I can't wait for your next great idea!
Maja
P.S. Thanks for you review of my story, "Stronger Than I Am". It's flattering to have such a well-established author say they liked what I wrote. ;D

It was a long, interesting, *rollercoaster* of a ride, but . . . thanks for sharing it.
LOL. I swear I have never thought a T-1 line was a slow connection before tonight. (And BTW, thanks for getting me almost kicked out of my fave internet cafe for screaming and threatening violence against the computer, you, and the universe in general. ;D)
I'll stop babbling now and just say it: The story rocked. You rock. Keep writing!
Maja

I was a little . . . m . . . we'll go with angry. Yes, I was a little angry with some of the previous chapters.
But this one TOTALLY makes up for it! RAIN ROCKS!
Onward and upward!
Maja

Yay! Rain is cool! Rain rocks! ::does a little dance::
Rain kept her promise! :D
On to chappie 11!
Maja

Um . . . well, that was kind of a foreboding chapter wasn't it?
But Rain is still fixing things so it's okay!
On to chappie 10!
Maja

Yay! Rain is fixing it! Ranma's being smart!
Now about that pesky 'Akane's going to die in three days' thing . . .

Evil enough to kill . . . maybe not . . . evil enough to torture . . . YES.
But Rain promised so I'll keep reading.
. . . she promised . . .