Love this story! Are you still working on it?

You are a great storyteller! Don’t sell yourself short!

Ha! The guys getting all teary eyed at Jacks wedding.

Ha!1 I hope Coop does take Pete on a ride when he can ands scare him/.

Good Coops surgery went well. And he can come back home-well Jacks house. And of course they will put something funny/clean in there speech about Jack and there time together.

Don't worry about the wait.

Yes Jack is a word-smith. Love how they joke around. I don't think any of them could stay at home while their wife/girlfriends was the one out in the action.

Good Jack is ok on his way home and didnt get hurt really just a graze and he had Mac to back that up. Now Michelle doesn't have to worry.

Glad Jack just got winged and told Michelle the truth.

Good way for the chapter to end.

Loved the banter with Dunc and Coop.

So far that went good. But I have a feeling getting to ex-fill wont be that easy.

nice little day the boys are having until a baby alert .

So far so good Jack didn't get hurt. So Michelle doesn't gave to worry too much yet. But his leg is bothering him at bit. I hope that won't be or cause any problems for Jack or the others .

Back with a good update.

Premier was good. Loved what Jack did or tried to do for Mac. I am mad that she had to die. I really liked her.

Aw love the little family type feel to this. But minus Jack and Mac not being with them. But at least they know where and what they are doing.

nice little update