Nice story but you could've token out the bad words and for. Example in chapter something WHAT THE FUCK. You could've said WHAT THE FLIP but the rest was awesome

Cute story. The cop out confused for a moment. You should continue and explore what happens with the investigation of the deaths.

This is your first one?! Ita good as fuck i would high five you and give you,

lincoln needs 2 control hiz anger issues

This was the best fucking fic i ever read. my favorite part was when lincoln and lucy created the song "iron man", thereby founding the entire genre of doom metal. it was so awesome i came in my dog.

but, if you want to know my only criticism... instead of ozzy osbourne, they should've created these two songs: "Chill" by 311, and "About that Life" by Atilla (unlike that fucking retarded ozzy osbourne wasame faggot atilla exists in this universe). you really almost ruined the fic there, but it's okay. i got hard when they murdered ronnie anne. also, i liked how assassin's creed exists, but ozzy osbourne doesn't which is good because he's not santed unlike atilla.

also, i liked the part where you put "repyed" instead of replied. As a porn star i can appreciate the factual english. good fucking fic, and i hope you get some wasame.

I stopped reading after the Iorn Man 're poor taste in music has sullied one of the best fics I know. They should have played Smoke on the Water by Deep Purple or at least Cowbys from He'll. Fuck I fucking hate Ozzy and Assess credit card info. I hope this stupid shit burns and that you have an above average day.

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I am very diaspointed in this, this was in fact a cop out. This means one thing, that fucking Taco Vendor SPIC Anne is ALIVE. FUUUUUUCK! I HATE FUCKING SPICE AND THEIR CHIPOTLE. IT TURNS MY ANUS INTO A VOLCANUS if you cath my drift ;(. I also love Pantera so don't Fuck with me. Metal will never die MOTHERFUCKER!

I FUVKING CAME NIGGA FUCK, GOD I FEEL AS IF MY CLITORI IS ROTTING OFF BECAUSE OF ALL THIS DOMINOEWS PIZZA I ARE, i want my favorites sister Lymn loid to be Lincols Athletic gf FUCK. Good chapter neibor

Like my late 90 year old brother told me, a good epic is a dead epic tolotliktok. Fuck my dick got hard at the thought of Lucy being lincoilns big tiddy goth gf FUCK. WHY CANNT I HABE THAT FUCKING SPICCY ANNE. Anyways good chapter you ducking neibhor whatsame

This the best fic I know wasame, i really hope you continue this. My dick fell off when I was the tender age of 46. Lucy Loud is the only thing in this mortal coil we call Eearth. My favorite part is when kiled Spiccy Anne because I don't like SPICS FUCK I HATE TOSE DIRTY MEXICHUMPS FUCK YOU RONNIE ANNE AAAHHHHHH

This fic made me want to just sit on the floor talking in my parents' 1972 Dodge Swinger bro yeah a group of pill pushers

This fic is fucking epic wasame yeah I like the bhanababinat parts

I loved it so much

Pretty Good story man