| Reviews for Holocene |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 10/21/2017 3 |
| VivaDragnire chapter 7 . 10/21/2017 Whoop! Alfred made it out! But where is Arthur? |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2017 You don't get enough comments! I love this Story! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/8/2017 Noooooo, Alfred! Such a mean cliffhanger! |
| VivaDragnire chapter 6 . 10/6/2017 OH NO! |
| Just a friend chapter 5 . 8/31/2017 Just a friendly warning that chapter 5 is just coding, we can't see much wording. So you've got time to fix what you want. :) Btw, I love this story, I found it after watching Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find them, so it was and is particularly exciting for me. I love the relationships between muggles and wizards, so thank you and please continue. |
 Narniaisinmycloset chapter 5 . 9/2/2017 hehe... Just a few hours before reading this chapter I learned a new Norwegian word... nice chapter though, it helps to establish Alfred! also, it might be just me but there is a lot of random code in there... |
| AllHeroesWearHats chapter 3 . 8/16/2017 Another great chapter! I like how Alfred's just like, 'well, I'm part of this now, obviously' and has just settled himself in for the ride. A very Alfred thing to do, I think haha I really do love how you write them both, there's a really comfortable feel between them in the dialogue that feels as though they've known each other forever. And I also love the pace you've got! Not too rushed or too slow, it's unfolding. |
| AllHeroesWearHats chapter 2 . 7/26/2017 Oh Oh oh Oh oh oh ohhhhhhhh this is an amazing story to find. This is why I love crossovers: they have the potential to be this, not a retelling of the original story with new characrters but a literal blend of universes and you have done it so perfectly. You writing style is beautiful and I'm honestly thrilled with your plot and characters, I eagerly await an update from you! I love how Alfred is lovingly oblivious to the wizarding world but it's his muggle smarts that are going to come in handy here, no one else will be able to think like him. And poor old Arthur, always over looked and undermined who wanted to prove himself and despite probably never wanting this much drama he will stubbornly push through anyway. I could say many more lovely things but I'll save them for future chapters ;) Thanks for all you've posted so far, good luck on future writings! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2017 This is amazing! I can't wait to see what comes next! |
