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It may have taken more than three years and over 70 thousand words (longer than the typical light novel), but now it's completed. Congratulations.

I'm intrigued since Momo is here.

This is like one of those horror maze stories!

I GOT BANNED AAAA.

Wtf I just loved this fanfic so much!
You have no idea

Wtf I loved this fanfic so much!
You have no idea

Nomus running rampant is bad news for everyone (once they've been ordered to attack they generally aren't intelligent enough to distinguish between friend or foe). It's fortunate that they don't believe in opening doors (guess they'd rather make their own).

Omg! This story has so much potential! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it!

I didn't realize just how long of a break it had been until I went back and looked at my previous comments.

Okay só maybe is wasn't three random caracthers hehe. I wonder what happened in the bus

Besides you picking 3 random caracthers and choosing to make a random story, you did good. I'm also a not native english speaker, so... Welcome to the club!

Difficult as it may be to keep track of several different fights all going on at the same time, you may still need to jump from one battle to another a little bit more, if only to avoid one of them reaching an end too soon. As it is even after Uraraka dropped a couple of forklifts onto Fake Kaminari, effectively ending the fight, on more than one occasion during the other battles you have characters reacting to sparks flying from the battle between the two Kaminaris. While these battles were all going on at the same time, from the reader's point of view it had already ended. This wasn't a problem with the other fakes because once they were destroyed they no longer seemed to have effected any of the other fights (in fact the battle between the two human capacitors seemed to be about the only one that seemed to attract anyone else's attention - and with all the fire and explosions I would have expected the battle with Fake Todoroki to be the one which kept attracting attention from everyone else).

When will be Chapter 18

Omg! This story has so much potential! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it!

And here I'm thinking they're all together ("And nobody's dead!" - someone smack Kaminari on the side of the head for me) and they may have finally found someone who can explain what's going on, and Todoroki and Bakugo have to go and start another fight (I expect that from Bakugo, but Todoroki usually takes a moment to think before starting a fight). Now I'll just have to wait for the next chapter to figure things out.