this is tooo sad... continue plz laurance. needs to wake upppp!

so sad...

WHY DO YOU MESS WITH MY FEELS THIS WAY

...I ship it

Mah fuckin gawd. This is awesome. Its true writing in its form. It follows the steps of the plot and doesn't disappoint.

This is really great. Love your writing style, you built up a lot of build up to the point where we see him. Keep it up.

Not bad, but the grammar (punctuation, etc.) needs a little work.

This is amazing. I can see all of the characters actually acting like this if this really happened. ( no that I should) I even started to cry.

A terrific way to start a potential story, I applaud you, sir.

OH MI GOSH NO! LAURANCE! WHY? Laurance isn't my fav character but I always liked him...*sniff*... Laurinda is my fav Laurence ship... please update this soon cuz I HAVE to know Laurence's fate... Nya.

This is so good!