This is a really good story

Dude did you forget this story? Also greetings fellow ADHD person

This is a really interesting story! i love it!

Oh this is polyamory? I didn't know .
Rather hard to think and accept lol, I wonder how you're going to make it work.

Ahh~ can I just say that I really love the little interactions between Jun and Arsene? Also I liked how he shows protectiveness and care towards Jun, honestly I just really love when the Personas themselves are given more attention. Seeing Arsene worry about Jun's arms being exposed around Kamoshida was pretty endearing too as well as Ryuji and Jun's relationship so far.

I'm so happy to see another Femc fanfic, especially one that's already looking really good. This is my second reading of it, don't know why I didn't immediately favorite it the first time, and can I just say that I really love Jun and her interactions with Ryuji, Ann, and Haru. I can see Jun and Ann becoming good friends right off the bat, as they've both had unsavory rumors spread about them and also face discrimination for being mixed.

honestly just ignore the concern trolling happening in the reviews, it's quite obvious why they're acting like that. I wouldn't take anyone that complains about whether poly is realistic in a fanfic about thieves with essentially magical girl transformations seriously to begin with.

Really glaring issue I noticed here: Ryuji barely knows Jun, yet has no qualms about physically reassuring her, let alone touching her to begin with. It struck me as extremely out-of-character and insensitive, especially considering the overly-polite nature of Japanese society and Ryuji's distaste of Kamoshida's depravity. The same thing goes for Ann, the towel, and the impromptu braiding session. It's one thing if they're both outcasts sticking together; it's entirely another if they recently met and are in a public place where such actions could be easily misconstrued, as they were. Not only is it OOC for Ann, but I imagine it would be for Jun, too. At this point in her life, I expect she'd rather prefer to avoid attracting attention to herself, that's all. Perhaps it would be better to wait until later in the story when they've strengthened their bond somewhat for such heartwarming scenes. It just seems a bit rushed.
I might be overstepping my bounds here, but I couldn't help but feel that this might be you projecting. I understand that you've endured some trials recently; however, I would ask that some degree of professionalism be maintained. I empathize with your situation, and I don't mind your venting in the ANs, but when such concerns bleed over into your work, they negatively affect its quality. All I wish is for you to achieve what I know you're capable of. Please don't sell yourself short or make compromises that you might regret.
I also advise against pursuing a polygamous pairing; such relationships seldom succeed in reality and, furthermore, would be egregiously out of place in this setting, especially considering the cognitive harem Ann, Ryuji, and Jun will be witness to later in Kamoshida's castle...

Shoehorning in the LGBT agenda is detrimental to the plot of this story. It's unnecessary, cliché, and as OOC as you can get when writing Persona 5's characters. I thought this story had potential; then again, it's my own damn fault that I'm disappointed for hoping that one of the half-decent writers on this site wouldn't be one of the many who sacrifices their plots on the altar of progressivism and political correctness.

I was trying so hard not to laugh at Sojiro's attempts to come off as a hardass...
Like, come on man. Who do you think you're fooling?
Anyway, this seems interesting so I'll be sticking around for a while.

Pretty good story.

Let me make it an even 100 reviews.

Im really impressed at how much character you have put into a girl so small and you added a lot of really good interaction with the talking persona and the new ideas that having a female trickster brings with it. Im waiting warmly for any updates to this as it has so far become my favorite P5 Story.

Well, at least you dashed my hopes of female protag being the one way to save akechi like female protag being the only way to save shinji in p3 before they could fully form.

Ryuuji is some pretty top tier brother material here, though whether it's younger or older, I can't really say.

Jun, though. Quiet cat-like waif needs a girlfriend or three. Let this child be happy!

i love this fanfic soo much V is chapter 7 gonna come out soon and is ryuujixjun canon?

Totally worth reading this entire story and the interactions with Jun and Ryuji. I can't wait for Kamoshida to get his ugly ass kicked. Its so adorable for Jun to look like a grade schooler, her shirt stature and glasses would make any guy, especially Ryuji, fall in love with her.