holy ballsacks, this was an emotional rollercoaster and I loved every moment of it (though my heart still fucking hurts over Sabo having to raise Luffy and the kids without Ace...my baby ;n;). very nicely done. and thank you so much for giving both Izo and Thatch a second chance at life, fuck that killed me...also, I have to point out, just for the sake of being petty: that scene near the beginning when Sabo corrected Ace's grammar (when Ace had said Luffy and me...or Sabo and me, I don't remember which...and Sabo said it's "Luffy and I"), Ace was actually correct. Luffy and me in that case was the proper phrasing because if you take out Luffy from the sentence, then it makes more sense for Ace to have said "me" not "I." just so you're aware :P God, I'm still trying to process my fucking emotions over this XD a part of me hates how you ended it without Sabo being reunited with Ace (because that tearful makeout session needed to happen), but another, more masochistic and sadistic, part of me is just writhing in ecstasy over the cruelty of it all. XD excellent job. you have accomplished the goal of every author: you tore out the hearts of every one of your readers and tickled them to death and beyond. congratu-fucking-lations XD

Omg! I just finished reading your story and I must say it's brilliant! You are a very talented writer, you make the story thrilling and very interesting, yet you manage to pour pieces of the real One Piece story in it, it's absolutely genius, I simply love the way you intertwine the stories, so beautifully executed, you are able to portray the characters exquisitely, the romance between Ace and Sabo is so sweet and cute, you managed to make it feel so real and natural, I must confess I really hope you're thinking of writing a sequel where we get to meet our favorite fire demon again, and also be part of the waves Luffy is surely to create. Thank you for writing this superb story, but mostly thank you for sharing it.

You need to make an epilogue #2! With Ace and sabo together!

Congratulations! Such a sweet ending!

*applaudes* encore, encore! (jk) but really, youve done some fantastic work gere and you better believe that this last chapter was quite a crowning and the crew and i got faint everytime i picture this perfect little bungalow on the sea sode and then all of them setting out for australia and egypt... *sighs in bliss* it's a great nental image.
Thanks so much for writing this story, 90k is a great acconplishment and it's nit just quantitiy there's a fair deal of quality at play here.
Good work and good luck! I look forward to seeing more of you!

Ahhh~~~ I'm so glad you managed to pull through and finish! but damn, Sabo and Ace will never meet again, will they? Will they? It's like Ace disappeared, although the fact that the two of them are never cold is kinda suspicious.

I thought it was Luffy's POV at first but then I realized it was Ace and that Aokiji had just been banished and I was like GO. RESCUE HIM.
And then he was gonna die and it was like srsly? Like, tbh, everybody just sacrificed everything for you, what the heck DON'T DIE.
So then they sent him back and I can accept that, I guess, just. Epilogue had better be good!
For now this will tide me over till we get an awesome summoning scene, yeah? ;)

I'M FUCKING CRYING YOU PIECE OF SJIASFADG
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING THE CHAPTER TO ME BUT STILL OH M SASHDGO;ZBAEHJIG[ASGAWGE
HEAGHIA

HE'D BETTER BE FUCKING ALIVE ZOE OR I'M GONNA CRY A RIVER ASQWUGJWRH
FUCK THAT
I'M GONNA CRY THE GODDAMN ATLANTIC OCEAN
I'M GONNA GO MOURN FOR MY EMOTIONS NOW, FUCK EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS, I LOVE YOU

Please update!

1) THIS STORY BRINGS ME JOY
2) SKILLET.
3) HELP TOO MANY EMOTIONS

I love this story! I found it last night and read it straight through from 10pm to 1am (slow reader lol). Great story! I can't wait to see the finale of the battle!

Go Luffy, way to get rid of a big player! I'm so happy that he managed to be a big help even with Ace drawing on his energy. Question, how much energy does it take for someone to send a demon /back/ to the other world? I mean, should Luffy be /able/ to do that? I guess it doesn't matter because he collapsed afterwards anyway, likely due to the effort of supporting Ace and sending a demon back, but wow. I feel like that cintract Aokiji made was flawed, you know? Like, 'i agree that i was unaware of this event' before it happens is kinda admitting, 'yeah, i totally knew aboit it.'... i guess that's just what willful innocence is, yeah? Haha. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, things are coming to a close, huh?

im dead?

*sobs* whyyyyyyy, I just commented /last/ chapter about how grateful I was that he couldn't die cuz he was a ghoooost...
But *sniffs* im kind of happy that Izo went with him. He won't be lonely, they'll be together, it wasn't in vain like it was in canon. This was horrible but I lile it a lot more. Fantastic job on this scene, looking forward to the next! (GO LUFFY! *Shakes head* Sabo has no idea what this means for either of them)

Fuck fick fuck fucj. What the hell?! And it doesn't get better?! Oh my heart! QwQ gah! -sends you my love but also my hate- Izo and Thatch! Please kill Blackbeard. Please please please