Awwww! that was amazing. The entire book was awesome. I wish this was the way it would've been originally,but , in my mind this is the best alternate ending to the Divergent Series and already it is my most favorite fanfiction. Thank you springberry for making me forget the annoying events that broke my heart when I read the ending of Allegiant. You truly are a very gifted person. Again This was the best closure we all needed. Thank you for sharing it with us all. I don't know how long will I stay elated about this fanfiction, but you have managed to make me smile. You are the best and one of the most inspiring author I know. and if I ever feel upset I know what to read to feel better and hopeful again.

Lots of love and praise
-Stella-

Their banter and heavy groping plus being caught was awesomeeee!

Natalie was so thoughtful and caring. The way she talked about Tobias and his purity from an outsider's perspective felt good because it felt like she wasn't pinning him for explanations. Jack and Niles' manipulation of the testimony was considerate too. I wish Tris and Tobias choose to become leaders too :)

Wow this chapter was so inspiring even in reality. I guess we should actually take most manifestos and I think especially THE DAUNTLESS MANIFESTO to our heart!

Sneaky,smart Tris XD

Cara you go girl!

Awkwardness aside Caleb is actually a great person and a better brother too.

Woow! Caleb's vast vocabulary was amusing XD

And Tris and Tobias sharing the same thoughts on sex were entertaining too !

"No, it's okay, Caleb. You can take the bed. I'll sleep over at Four's."

"Oh, does he have an aptitude for Abnegation as well?"

I look at him questioningly.

He clears his throat. "Cause he too doesn't mind taking the sofa, you know?"

And

"That might be because he doesn't need much clothing while he's here,"

I must've died while laughing my ass off XD

God! cliffy!

Determination and planning are always the best ways to win. I am glad Shauna is at least acting better now.

Wow Soothing or sleeping serum and its properties are so awesome. Great idea!

AWWW a very emotionally draining chapter but I know you won't let the readers down unlike VR.

Fluffiest and smuttiest and the most oddly satisfying chapter for all naughty people like me XD Thank you the way you capture their emotions and passion has me enamored with your writing skills :)

Shaunaaaa!
God that was embarrassing but hilarious.

I love to see the connection between Tris and Uriah too :)

Is it me or are all Divergents getting nightmares as some weird adverse effects due to serums?