Reviews for One Small Step
Clueless-Major chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
This is - honestly I've lost count on how many times I've read this one shot. After about 10 years, I still read this every now and then and reminisce about the good ol' years of awesome InuYasha fanfic. I still love this. I loved it when I first read it 10 years ago, when I was 11 and I still love this when I'm 21. It hits all the right emotions in me, and I can't help but read this every now and then.

One thing that does disturb me - or no... make me a little sad. Is this line: "She never met me while she was traveling between worlds. That is another odd thought."

It's as if to say that after all Inuyasha's waiting... all 400 years, he still might not even see his Kagome. Like, maybe he died right before he got to see her again. And that is so heartbreaking. I hope that wasn't what you were implying... because I really want Inuyasha to be happy (at least in your fic's cannon).

Anyway, really great writing. I miss fanfics like these.
Dog Ear Lover chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Awwwww
TheReviewer101 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
AWWW...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Aw... Very well written.
bobalina chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
Augh. If you have the time to, and have not yet, read Phoenix Blade; Time Lapse (or something to that effect). It is not only wicked funny (uh...to me) and chock full of excellent smut, it details quite thoroughly the anguish (oh) felt by Inuyasha and Kagome regarding Puppy vs. Mature, OLD Inuyasha & Kagome. I sincerely hope that made sense, but I'm too tired/stubborn to care/check for errors. Keep writing!

Toodles,

bobalina
dark daimon fate chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Aw. :) That's sweet...
Winter Bean chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
I dont know if oyu wrote that intendign to that sad but it worked i'M both sad and happy. More please

~Al
touyalover chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
its really short but extremly sad and very original ! love it!
DreamScene chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
This is very heartfelt. I really enjoyed Inuyasha pining after Kagome for a change and for so long. Very sweet.
aithrandir chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
so sad..
Fu Fu's the name chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
You rying to make me cry with this story? Because it seems like you are! I loved it, so sweet,
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Pretty good...I assumed the penguin thing went without saying?
AmayaSaria chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
I really liked it! _
Selenity Jade chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Aw! That was rather sweet _;
akuma-river chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
AW Kawaii. Keep going Inu Yasha, you will get her. Coolsa.
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