Great

Loved it!

Great story! It may come off as a bit cold but sometimes that is what one deserves and needs in order to understand the devastation they brought to others due to their past actions.

this was good. and her revenge crazy harsh

Amazing chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Great chapter! Edward got what he deserved!

damn that was goooooodddd

Good story. It was a little cold, but by implying there was a possibility for true forgiveness makes it less so. Also I have read a number of your others stories and they were quite good. So kudos.

It’s was good with just the one-shot story. The second chapter that was super cruel. You shouldn’t have mess with someone’s heart. Yes what Edward did was wrong and not taking Bella’s opinions about what to do with her baby. He learned his lesson, but he wasn’t messing with someone hearts and then breaking them. Again it’s super cruel.

Edward got what he deserved. great story thank you.

Please write more chapters about Edward's POV and stuff like that.

Please remove Edward out. I am glad I didn’t read crap shit story. Eww want to throw up ugly bastard monster Felix and Bella ugly nasty stinky pairing ever.

I liked it. I thought Bella went a little overboard. Im all for straight up vengeance but messing with someone's emotions is where i draw a line.

Just read the two chapters. Couldn’t put it down the story was good. I did like the first one more tho. I still hope that in the darker one rose and Emmett still get to be with Bella.

that was perfect