Reviews for Misson Acomplished
TinyFox2 chapter 15 . 2/19/2019
I really want to get to the end of this! Also, nice chapter.
TinyFox2 chapter 14 . 2/19/2019
I care! I think that this is a legitimately good story which I'm really enjoying!
TinyFox2 chapter 9 . 2/19/2019
I reckon that she should try an get someone else arrested like she can in the game by getting someone's fingerprints on the weapon. Then everyone else will be calmer.
Also, it's not Magical Girl Miyuki.
It's..
Magical Girl, Pretty Miyuki! (insert pose that the guy talking about it with his friend does)
Celestic1234 chapter 15 . 1/24/2019
This is so freakin good! Great job!
Guest chapter 14 . 12/5/2018
Taking control of your own story is a noble thing. I for one applaud it. :)
Venandi chapter 14 . 11/26/2018
Alrighty. Good luck!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/30/2018
So... you're going to continue this... right? It's been over a month.
Venandi chapter 12 . 6/7/2018
SQUEEEAAAAAAH I'M SO HAPPY THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/6/2018
Great story (save for some typos and perhaps a bit of redundant text as well)! Will your updates be more frequent now?
Venandi chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
If you want something new, here are some ideas:
-Ayano finds out a student has depression and tries to help them.
-The Student Council begins to actively look for any troublemakers
-The delinquents are kinda just... there.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/26/2018
I guess Venandi and I are officially playing "by the way" tag now as I realize that I totally forgot to list my OC's appearances and personalities. So without any further ado...

Appearances and personalities: They both have maroon colored hair and ice white eyes. Suhai is a toothpick/soyboy looking dude appearance wise. He comes across as meek, non-threatening and even likeable but in reality he wants nothing more than to lure the whole world into his basement so he can torture them to death. Sha is physically beautiful with Megami sized breasts and a waist to kill for. She is however much more comfortable with showing her cold and psychopathic personality than her brother and does so often. That's not to say, however, that she's incapable of turning on the charm when needed. She is in fact just as skilled at deception as her brother. She's a bit of a masochist, and because of that (and certain "games" the two would play when they were first exploring their dark sides) and her self-defense training she fills the role of enforcer between the two. Suhai, being the scheming sadist that he is, fills the role of the brains/strategist. They are highly dangerous individuals and despite their age, should not be underestimated.
Venandi chapter 11 . 3/26/2018
Forgot to mention this in previous review: Kokori can be worse than Musume when it comes to bullying, and worse than Kizana when it comes to ego.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/22/2018
Now for contract number 2 featuring two, highly disturbed OCs who'll be appearing multiple times (assuming you pick this contract and don't kill them prematurely).

Clients: The twins Suhai (M) and Sha (F) Akuma

Target: Kokuma Jutsu (required) and Shin Higaku (optional)

Method: Stabbing

Reason: :)

Other: Can you feel that? The wonderful fear and despair? The students here are practically sweating it! Murders, disappearances, "accidents", all these things have made for a perfect opportunity to spread misery. And I beat my dear sister in our coin toss to decide who dies first!

In our school, there exist those certain pretenders. Those that claim to serve our unholy father, and yet do nothing to satisfy Him. These pretenders, these funny clowns, would be better off serving directly don't you agree? One such pretenders, Kokuma Jutsu, has been selected to make the journey to hell as sacrifice. Lure her into her clubroom, and spill her blood with their signature knife upon that pentagram rug of theirs. 500,000 yen will be your reward for doing this. If you can do the same to my sister's choice, Shin Higaku, the sum will increase by 250,000 yen. Take pictures of the deed as proof. We await word of your success. Hail Satan.

A/N: Their names come from the literal translation of Devil Worshipper. Also, I failed to mention in the previous post but Kokoro Momoiro wants a picture as proof of the deed and is willing to pay, in cash, 50,000 yen.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/22/2018
Good story so far. I've got two contracts, the first is a bit of a call back...

Client: Kokoro Momoiro

Target: Mei Mio

Method: Electrocution

Reason: It's personal

Other: I know it was her. I KNOW IT WAS HER! I know she's the one who sent you to kill Musume. I understand Musume had her problems, I do too, but she was still my best friend. The only real one I had. Every day I see Mei walking the halls with that... disgusting relieved expression of hers. And when she sees me? Satisfaction.

Every Friday, just after school has ended, she goes to the bathhouse to wash up and relax before studying. I want you to kill her there, when she's most at peace. Shock her real good, if you get my drift. Good luck.
Venandi chapter 9 . 3/14/2018
NAME: Kokori Hanatario
GENDER: Female
APPEARANCE: Waist-length golden hair, green eyes, fake tanned skin
REASON FOR ASSASSINATION: Bullying and cyberbullying Saino Ishinaki because they both have a crush on Fureddo Jonzu
REQUESTED ELIMINATION: Lethal or non-lethal poisoning, your choice
ADDITIONAL INFORMATION: A drama queen, spoiled brat, & rich kid. When she wants something, she gets it—usually by blackmailing others. Not the nicest person in the world. Very prideful. No club. Saino Ishinaki would like to help you.

NAME: Saino Ishinaki
GENDER: Female
APPEARANCE: Shoulder-length plum-colored hair, pink eyes, fair skin
PERSONALITY: Very shy and quiet. Loves to read and draw. Sweet.
CLUB: Art
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