I liked the story. Its a very refreshing take on the narutoverse. There were some things i didnt like but they didnt really affect the story overall. Id give it an 8/10

Ino.

Truly a masterpiece of Naruto Fanfiction. Very well done!

Holy crap, that was, umm, I can’t describe that, it was Plainly beautiful.

Holy shit...Just, holy shit...

Okay now you're just fucking screwing around. Madara did not "found" the Uchiha clan, he was merely the leader at the time of the founding of the leaf village. He and Hashirama created the leaf. Secondly, Hiraishin and Rasengan at 9? Seriously? Coming up with a perfectly viable taijutsu style that worked against an A ranked rogue shinobi, again, at 9? Have you ever seen a 9 year old, like how tall they are? Fucking hell

Damn, really channeling the Joker and Harley Quin huh? I LOVE it! This is taking a concept we know and upgrading it so epic proportions. Well done. Well fucking done!

Dude Im starting to question your sanity. Are you okay? That level of knowledge and enlightenment and insanity makes me think of V for Vendetta.

So far this is one of the best stories I have read. It’s written perfectly. If I didn’t know better I’d think Im reading a book for a famous author.

Soooo. I read it all in one sitting and i loved it. Anyways now i am going to go and read books probably plan something, hopefully get sent in prison for something i didn't do, you know the normal things

having pushed through my dislike for the path this fic was going I can honestly say that I have changed my mind. I have gone back and re-read the previous chapters and while I still wish for a pleasant ending, I can't deny that I am enjoying this game of cat and mouse between ino and naruto.

damn ino's gonna be harley.

while I sertainly understand where this story is going I find myself being dissuaded from it. there is good reason why the joker, when given a concrete origin, is transformed into the lunatic we love by way of chemical toaster bath. the joker is meant to be chaotic and mysterious. he foils batman because he is unpredictable not necessarily through skill. having spent the first five chapters with the mental image of a kakashi esk naruto with abandonment issues leaves me whiplashed by his sudden transformation. in the description you say this is a neglect fic. in the end the neglect was really just to justify naruto's eventual psychosis. damn it i miss my book boy! I will be thoroughly disappointed if there is no foil for naruto. the joker can't exist without batman. who is naruto's batman?

not to dis on your fic or anything as this is more a critique on naruto as a series, but why the fuck is henge such an easy technique? in cannon we assume it is a requirement to pass out of the academy. and as far as I can tell shinobi on average don't have the ability to sense chakra. In the case of this fight between itachi and naruto kazan's claim to fame seems to be that he was able to realistically mimic someone he had never met. kazan isn't impressive when compared to cannon. naruto in his fight with kaguya invented a startling amount of naked men. the men, whose image's managed to be realistic enough to cause an erotic response from kaguya. mind you he did this on the fly under heavy stress without previous use of male bodies in his annoying sexy-no-jutsu. while I don't have ocd I do tend to fixate on the power system in naruto and how the 'magic' works.

i did not see that coming, at all. the itachi thing got me so hard.

you have written a really good story, thank you very much