Sad to see it end, and when she's so close too. Ah well, I knew getting in to this story that it wouldn't be completed, and it was a well written story while it lasted. I hope this is continued at some point, it's one of my favorite FoZ crossovers.

I should add to my other review that you could also just not review your work much before posting, or have some other similar issue. My guess was really just a shot in the dark based on experience. Either way, good stuff. Keep up the work, maybe I'll have more to read soon? Two years of waiting must make a damn good chapter.
I await more, as always.

I've been reading this story for a while now and I enjoy it. I've got a question, though I don't expect an answer given the update schedule for this fic, do you have a mental handicap of some kind? I ask earnestly and without any glib intended because you write very well in general but make a very specific kind of spelling mistake that I don't see often. Most people misspell a word and stick with it because they don't actually know how to spell the word, or they misspell it once a certain way on occasion by accident. Your spelling mistakes are odd because you clearly demonstrate that you know how to spell each word I've seen messes up, but almost regularly in your writing something is misspelled. I've reviewed some papers of a friend of mine who has mild autism, and he makes the exact same mistakes. An almost patern-based misspelling of various words, almost always in the same way. No idea why that happens, maybe it's how a disability manifests when doing something so heavily based on stream of consciousness like writing. Either way, your spelling mistakes reminded me and I way curious. Sorry if that's an overly person question, I do not mean to be rude. Overall, you have very seamless transitions between points of view, and your writing is just dense enough to be engaging, but not so dense as to make it hard to read. I'll finish what parts of the story are written and then I'll wait for more, I suppose. Not many FoZ and Destiny crossovers, so I guess I'll be waiting a while.

Will you update the story?

why do they always accept the contract and binding? I mean really can't there be some rebelliousness to say no and walk away. maybe fight the Academy teachers that try to stop you from doing so.

Plot is great. I really like the OC and where the story is going, but you probably need a beta

Needs a beta. Many spelling errors and incorrect word usage. Acrain instead of arcane, recon instead of reckon etc.

The amount of spelling mistakes make this painful to read.

Shit this is good I hope you continue

I can see zabst being a hunter

really hope that you will continue this

not ruins its runes

hope that Siesta has the light

its Tabitha not Tabatha

not brimmer its Brimir