Reviews for The Paradise - A new beginning
Ruby2Redfort chapter 11 . 7/2
Update please! It is lovely!
Christmas 95 chapter 10 . 8/11/2018
Well, I'm very curious what will happen in the next update! So far I have been really enjoying this story!
Jennifer Barkwor chapter 7 . 2/13/2018
Please finish this, it’s wonderful.
BringBackTheParadise chapter 6 . 9/12/2017
Thank you Carrie for your kind words! I loved the show very much, so I am glad you think I did good :) I definitely want to explore those ideas you wrote about and a lot of scenes are in progress for future chapters! (As for the watches I meant those pocketwatches they always have on them, but maybe I should've clarified that in the story :D)
Carrie chapter 6 . 8/29/2017
Great work. You've captured the characters really well. I've enjoyed the loose ends you've tied and the new plots introduced. I would love a special appearance from Miss Audrey and Denise moving ahead, and perhaps some of the difficulties Moray may have with finding a balance between supporting her as a mentor, loving her as a fiancée and guiding her as an experienced male business owner in this time. I'll just also add that they didn't have watches in this time :) great great work!