Reviews for Shadow of Fate: Thieves's Revelation
RaiaYuki chapter 14 . 5/3/2019
Think you can update? This is really good.
WinxStarDracoFire chapter 14 . 2/20/2019
Oh, I hope you add the Tokyo Mirage Session character when they reach Cyrkensia.
FangSniper chapter 11 . 12/12/2018
Hey man I'm curious do you think you'll do a chapter similar to one in the birthright and conquest route where one of the characters gets really sick and the others have to try and get medicine for them in an area where enemies are
ZenFirebird chapter 14 . 12/11/2018
New chapter and more character join the party. Now curious to see who will get a support conversation with first with Rinkah, Hayato, and Oboro.
I’m also playing fire emblem fate
kingdom hearts guy chapter 14 . 12/11/2018
We'll have to wait for the release date for the first dlc to come, but we're very excited to see Joker in action
Coral the Leviathan chapter 14 . 12/11/2018
Yes, we have heard of rumors of Joker. Who'd have thought they'd go and do that? Sure gave us all a good surprise.

On another note, the new chapter here is pretty good. Not much new combat or new interaction... Well, there are some new interaction with the Persona Users, but still. Not much of those. And of course Ryuji and Kanji would be the 'strike first, ask later' type of people. I'd be surprised if they weren't. Especially Ryuji. We all know how he can get.

Looking forward for more. And for any new conversations
WinxStarDracoFire chapter 13 . 11/21/2018
Please update, it's a really good story.
ShinyKyu chapter 3 . 8/28/2018
You’ve already established that Joker’s real name is Ren here, yet several times, you accidentally call him Akira instead. This slip-up alone that occurs not once, but several times in the same chapter, makes the flow take a huge hit.
ShinyKyu chapter 2 . 8/28/2018
Technically speaking, you shouldn’t say Medieval era and Edo era because those refer to periods of time, which includes the entire world. Saying “during the Edo Period” implies that you are talking about Japan, but can technically mean anything about anywhere else in the world in the same time period. You have to say “the Medieval era in Europe” or “Edo period in Japan” if you wanna talk about those specific places.
HaloEmblem chapter 13 . 7/14/2018
I wonder when the Group goes against the SEES, if Futaba will hack Ageis/Aigis.
kingdom hearts guy chapter 6 . 4/6/2018
No worries, but that, was the awesomeness idea to make the crossover story
Jlargent chapter 13 . 4/3/2018
You know if Rhajat is anything like Thraja I fear what would happen if you expose her to the Darknet.
Minako the Dragon Maiden of DW chapter 14 . 10/5/2017
Although I don't play Fire Emblem but crossover with Persona has interested me.
guesr chapter 13 . 9/5/2017
This seems to fast to be honest but there is still time to flesh out the details. And the result of the PT vs IT is appropriate considerdering the the thier feats and such of course the IT losing is the best decision there even os a vide on youtube about a disscussion of which of the three would win in a fight
lastfight5 chapter 13 . 9/4/2017
The premise is good, but there's something wrong with the entire story: It's too fast.

With this kind of premise and story, it needs a lot of time and effort in it. Reading through them is a pain because things are going too fast for me to get my head around. The awakening, the progress, the plot itself, it's going too fast and chapters are too short to be sufficient.

This problem exhibits here, since it displays the PT's curb stomp battles, even though it should be even fight. I'm not sure how FE system works, but I expect it to be everyone's knocked out except for the two leaders for the climax.

It's not just here, there are problems in past chapters, awakenings for example, simply because there's like tiny build up before awakening and extensive answer for the question 'Why?'.

Also, didn't I remember the last chapter went out only few days before this? Maybe wait for a week or two and then start writing, because honestly, this story needs a short break.
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