| Reviews for Everything Forbidden In the Law |
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   viha chapter 4 . 7h i really wished you had changed this chapter slightly when rewriting this story. The part where she says he is controlling her I wish she would have remained adamant until syaoran agreed. Because even if this is AU world changing a characters basic essence makes it too OOC. I can agree sakura is a cry baby and she used to get intimidated by li initially but she was also headstrong and ready to stand up to someone if she thinks something is wrong, even if that someone scared her. So her agreeing to rule no. 56 is very OOC ..if nothing else she could have said that change the rule from ask permission to just inform that she is going out somewhere for a given duration and will be back by a certain time. |
| K16 chapter 3 . 8/23 Make him more Christian gray |
| K16 chapter 1 . 8/17 I'm lost why rewrite it? |
| Arise and Awaken chapter 1 . 8/10 Can't wait for the upcoming chapters! Keep continuing on how you want to portray your story! |
| Princessa Muse is a Hufflepuff chapter 1 . 8/10 this was great. You've really improved. |
| Ln Lu Lo Li chapter 1 . 8/6 Hi. I see in this edition Sakura has changed. She doesn't sound so childish and she had some one, well, Kind of. In this chapter I Missed our little Sakura. I'm happy you don't abandon this story. I think, well the title Tells you about what the story is going to be about. If I don't línea story, I just Stop to read (just once I put a sugestión). I'll continúe waiting for updates. |
| iammai1097 chapter 1 . 8/3 Yess! Its nice so far and somehow to explain how Xing immediately warmed up to Sakura or maybe saw his mother in her or something along those lines hehe and the chemistry between Sakura and Syaoran too, it's to soon to say with this chap hopefully we'll get more on the next chap thanks so much for writing this! |
| Princessa Muse is a Hufflepuff chapter 1 . 8/2 I understand what you mean. I read these because they're Fantasy. I know they're not right. But I honestly really enjoyed this story. |
| nufina chapter 1 . 8/2 its okthankyou |
| AvatarUzumaki chapter 1 . 6/22 can't seem to see the updated chapter, only the first chapter is showing |
| xsahera chapter 1 . 6/18 For some reason, only chapter 1 is showing up :/ |
| aphr0dite09 chapter 1 . 6/16 Where are the other chapter? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13 I cannot see the rest :( |
| nufina chapter 1 . 6/13 wheres the other chapters? is it gone? or is it only mine? |
| Sabrina chapter 1 . 6/12 Hello, but does something happen to the story as everything is gone except for the first chapter? |
