This is cute! I love it. I like this ship as they are both runners

yeah sorry, it's my first time writing a story about this. sorry about rushing it and that it was confusing. I will take that in mind. thank you

Overall good, just needs a little bit of extra time. When I approach this type of story, I am aiming for the structure of meeting, warm up and revelation, a bit of a slow burn. Anyway, pay attention to the capital letters, give each character a separate article when they speak. This way, people won't get confused during reading. Keep up the good work, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.