Why Law is shown such a sadistic and cold! He is supposed to be a nice guy! Anyways I am loving this fiction.

Funny! Liked it! What a smart mouth Law has got!

Upon reading the story. I think you've made Zoro very unlikable. Sure he's gruff around the edges, has some questionable hobbies and a slight obsession with dry, snappy insults but he isn't so horrible. I think it's been exaggerated in this story. He id a decent person but not like this. He is the main antagonist which is quite strange considering Sanji and Zoro have never been so... antagonistic towards each other during extenuating situations.

Even with all his complaints and harsh judgements, canon Zoro wouldn't act this way. In fact. I think he would behave entirely differently. It irks me that his only point in the story was to be confused over Sanji or to literally yell at Law, who is also an asshole too. A loveable one but still an ass nonetheless.

Even so. for the sake of this story, I hope Zoro gets his shit together and Sanji has to stop acting like Zoro carries all the blame for their relationship. Also. Luffy, Robin and Law are kinda out of line at times but I see where they're coming from. However, I hope Zoro stops acting like an asshole, too.

oh, law sanji why dont the two of you just "bang" it already XD

YES! I knew it was Luffy and Usopp! There were hints all over the story! I am pretty happy how this story turned out to be. Especially the bit with the Vinsmoke brothers. It was super cute (don't worry Ichiji you will get your turn soon!). Seriously this entire family setting melted my heart. It's adorable. And is Sanji's second child a girl? That would be nice...

I hope this story gets a sequel. Zoro and Sanji still haven't made up yet. Though i admit Soraji's constant attacks on him is pretty hilarious!

So this story was a good ride. Now i am gonna go catch up on "old soul"! Seriuosly when will i ever catch up?!

good

oh my good luffy and usopp?!
how sneaky of you to reveal it right at the end

another child aww i want a daughter:') i love uncle!vinsmokebros and grandpa zeff btw! i cant imagine how law and zeff first meeting went lol. maybe soraji will be the future's greatest swordsman? since he keeps challenging zoro. thank you so much for this story! and im looking forward to your newest creation!

First of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH! And not only for this beautiful story, also for each of your works. The narrative, the handling of the characters and every universe you create for them is fascinating. In addition to the rich variety of genres and your facility to make each story appealing and entertaining to the end (sorry for repeating myself, but I admire too much good inventiveness and ability to be so prolific).
And this story ... OMG! I never imagine Luffy and Ussop ! xD
I especially love these last chapters! The happiness of Law and Sanji as a couple melts me! I love them so much and I always want them to be happy. 3 In addition, it is always pleasant to see them in a family (either with their own children or with a Chopper, Penguin and Sacchi practically adopted by them, as in Stylo).
I say goodbye and thank you again.
P.D: excuse my horrible english taken from the translator -_- U

I think part of my previous comment got cut off? I also wanted to say that Jinbe's reaction is common for nearly everyone . . . nice touch, and the poo and wee-fests also common, so it's great that you didn't romanticise that, and that Law couldn't swaddle Soraji automatically, though he is perfect of course. I also gave credit to Lola as the midwife. What happened to those lines? Maybe I'm just repeating myself . . .

Thank you so much for everything!
Hello, this is the first time I comment but I always read everything you write, and this time I had to comment to thank you for showing us this beautiful story, I loved it as you have no idea;
LawSan is my OTP and I only speak Spanish, I use the translator to read you so I forgive some inconsistencies in my comment XD
It gives me a little pain Zoro, but just a little XD
The Vinsmoke brothers assembled! Taking photos with Soraji XDXDXD brilliant!
Law and Sanji, both happy and with children, was so beautiful;
I can only tell you that she is one of the best writers I have read, and I will read each of her future projects as "Old Soul", and please continue with that charisma and that great imagination.
Thank you again!

Yo pensaba que eran Luffy y Nami! No con Usopp xD

Me encanta como quedó todo, igual como dices, las cosas con Zoro no se resolvieron de todo, pero supongo que más adelante lo hará.

Pensaba que Niji y Yonji hiban a maltratar a Soraji, pero que bueno que no!

Law es tan romántico! Es lo que Sanji necesita, en verdad!

Fue tan hermoso que lo extrañaré.

So Ussop was proposing to Luffy? I hope so, cos I dislike the marriage trope, these boys are doing just fine without it! :-) However, if that was something, you'd do it well . . . Ussop' going to have to fight Boa.

The 2nd baby was premature, at 6 months - or the tobbleborgs (I forget the spelling) have a shorter gestation period? I can't remember. Anyway, congratulations again Law and Sanji. Who was stealing Sanji's knickers? ( way back when) ... Thanks for a great last chap. I wonder what Law is up to now. Seems like a great Dad, but he probably gets to play good cop.

The Vinsmoke brothers came to the party? That development would be interesting, and poor Pedro losing his hands. Where did King end up? Only Robin knows. Zeff was lovely. This was nice from Zoro:

"But there was one thing he had to admit – seeing the cook happy with someone that made him smile like that felt like an intense relief. Whatever Zoro had done to him wouldn't be the roadblock to any future relationships Sanji would have. And it honestly filled him with a different sort of happiness, because he felt the cook deserved it."

I've read some of your sequels, and it would be interesting to have one to this. Oh, Robin faded into the background, but Nami! Her eyes sparkling, working that crowd. I like that she didn't get the full on maternal role, but that she still cared. Lola the midwife was great. Bepo?

Thanks for the last chapter. Is our surgeon still rapidly ageing, or is there some hold on that? He's got another son to take care of, and that will put enough lines on his face. The fact you do all of this without your laptop is still impressive. Thanks so much for "Replica." I'll write some more if I think of it. Jinbei's feelings with a newborn are totally understandable, and Reiju ended up being a very positive influence. Thanks again (3rd? time). You do this so well :-)

oh my god this chaptet is so freakin cute
soraji sounds like a cute little darling! i love how he has dark blue hair like law.
and the closing paragraph oh my god its so freaking cute aaaa
i thought i am but im not ready for this to end yet:(
ugh good job with this story i really really love this

so cuteeee! i demand u to make a sequel for this, u creature of human! 20 chapter!

The baby's beautiful! I hope there will be a sequel to this story! I'm so happy for Sanji and Law !