| Reviews for Birthright |
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Guest chapter 33 . 1/3/2018 your awesome great ending. |
inuyasha16451 chapter 33 . 10/6/2017 Omg. That was bloody awesome. |
jaylamode chapter 33 . 9/21/2017 I am so in love with this story ! I just finished it and it was so beautiful and well thought ! Your writing is amazing ! |
in your dreams as well chapter 33 . 7/16/2017 Stoppppppp this chapter made me cry! It was so well written and I love how it ended with everybody reuniting on the afterlife very happy ending just how I like them ! |
gabrielleannele chapter 33 . 7/2/2017 This is a certainly beautiful ending! I think this is one of the best endings you've written. The elements of the story were well-balanced and you could really feel the bond of the main characters. Crazy how far they came and you can feel it run deep. And the mirror lemon?! I think that one is really good (can you include it in the new itahinasasu? pretty please). Im pretty sure that this one is not easy to write so good job and Congratulations on finishing this story! :D |
Guest chapter 33 . 7/1/2017 Bawling here! Im going to miss this story so much. You've written this chapter so well. I love how emotional it was and that mirror lemon, welll that was hot! |
Guest chapter 33 . 6/30/2017 Ok, so my emotions are in a mess. Im a bit teary eyed to see how far the story has come from Passionate Kisses till Birthright. I'll hunt you down if you ever take this down ok? Haha so many emotional moments and I love the flow of this chapter. The lemon is steamy as well esp the mirror part, i guess im a bit deviant as well plus I kind of find it hilarious that Fugaku has some hots for Hinata lol. |
Guest chapter 33 . 6/30/2017 Im literally tearing up. This series is literally one of the most beautiful fics ive read in thus website. It is something i would read over and over again. I just cant get enough of this three people pairing. I checked out your prof and turns out you have another itahinasasu coming up! Lol, i can imagine the brothers ogling her in the medic uniform lol |
Guest chapter 33 . 6/30/2017 What a tearjerker. I know this story had to end eventually but reading about them dying and growing old is just too depressing and sad and urrrgh...my uchiha and Hyuuga hotties will be forever young, forever beautiful and forever in love. Thanks for writing this. I will never tire of your itahinasasu stories! |
Guest chapter 33 . 6/29/2017 Wow what a wonderful way to end a beautiful story. I was a bit emotional with this chapter, it was moving, humorous, steamy and just about every emotions you could think of. I already miss this pairing! |
Emirri chapter 33 . 6/30/2017 It was sad (but realistic) that they didn't all die at the same time. I really felt for Hinata being the one left behind for two years. Nice to think of everyone being reunited though and being together for eternity. All in all, a heartwarming final chapter. Thanks for the story. |
ViperChick47 chapter 33 . 6/29/2017 I literally broke down crying this was such a beautiful end to a beautiful story |
Guest chapter 33 . 6/29/2017 This chapter made me tear up. It was sublimely wonderful. A great end to a beautiful story, can't wait for your next itahinasasu. I hope you post it soon because I miss this pairing so much already. |
Splaaash-attack chapter 33 . 6/29/2017 I loved this story, you did a great job! |
Guest chapter 32 . 6/29/2017 Great story, not sure if you are still accepting suggestions for the epilogue. But I wonder if you'll do the scene where Hinata welcomes Itachi and Sasuke in the afterlife (implies that Hinata passed on first). From then, maybe they would watch over their descendants. I love your stories and Im a massive fan however I feel that sometimes it lacks emotional depth, that it just plays on positive emotions. With this one, sometimes I get tired reading one chapter because it feels to fast and I cant really connect to the characters. You have a flair for writing and your speed is amazing so please keep writing. I hope you take this one as a constructive critique (not a flame) |