I like it

Nice

Poor Grant, he went through a lot

Great start

This chapter made me put down my phone and go grab my computer so I could review. Thank you so much for actually making him not just 'misunderstood' but legitimately a bad guy who doesn't trust easily which makes sense because of the way he grew up plus being in prison for a while. Some people try to victimize villians even in a redemption story so it fresh to see someone acting like someone in that situation would act.

Really great fic. I’d been passing it by because I despise Victoria Hand (give your agents, including one who isn’t field certified, instructions to contact an extraction team and then don’t actually send a team? Scum of the earth!) but I finally gave it a shot. Your writing style is excellent, with lots of great details. I really appreciated how you worked in the little signs of how bad Grant had gotten, two years in a prison like that would mess anybody up and that’s on top of his screwy childhood. It’s not a clean situation.

I like it. I like the Victoria/Grant scenes. I really enjoyed it. awww I love the end, that was cute. I really enjoyed reading this. I love the friendship between Grant/Victoria. Great work. :)

I really like that Grant was sexual abused by Christian. I love the interactions between Hartley/Grant as well as Victoria/Hartley. I like that Victoria/Hartley are lesbains. I love a story even more when their are LGBTQ characters. again I like the Grant/Victoria scenes. I like that Grant doesn't see Victoria in a sexual way. I like the victoria/Grant interactions. I like that Grant is teaching himself to cook. well done.

I like that Grant got a tattoo on his head. I like the Jail/Prison interactions, it's funny. I like that how truly gross christian was, sexually abusing his brother. I like that Christian did do one kind thing for Grant thought. I love that Victoria/Grant interactions. Great chapter. well done.

I really enjoyed the Grant/Victoria interactions. they are so in character, it's scary how you get them so spot on. I like that Grant said that he could kill or rape Victoria. then she just went to sleep. I like that Grant checked all the house and took weapons and hide them near his bed. I like that Victoria offer Grant chocolate and he said he wasn't a dog. I like that she ate it. I like that Grant open up a bit more about his family to Victoria. I like the rabbit scenes. I like your author notes. well done.

Amazing work. I can't accurately describe how much I enjoyed reading this, but I needed to try.

Complete? No. Nope. I need more. This was so brilliant. I need more! What happens next. PM me if you write a sequel

Oh dear. He's going to see Simmons die in the framework, won't he? And in other news, I suspect that we also know as to what has happened to Gill and his friend in the framework too.

Phenomenal quality of writing, please continue

This deserves way more reviews and favorites than it has.

Extremely well done. :D