Man, I have been following this fanfic for a while and opened it today and saw the hiatus notice. Then I started going through the chapters when I realized that the entire preliminaries and meeting with Jiraiya is gone along with Gaara Naruto fight. How exactly did you fuck this story up so bad? Anyway hope 2 weeks is enough for you to fix everything. Feel very sorry for you. :)

loved the chapter and it had its awwww moments like when the gang wanted to rush out to help Naruto. I'll have to reread the chapters but I honestly figured Naruto would have absorbed the 1 tails attacks using the preta path. then he would be able to fill his reserves instantly. and since the attacks came from the one tail, it would theoretically be the biju Chakra being absorbed. hmmm wonder if by doing that he could technically become the 10 tails container or gain abilities of the other containers. hmmmm from what I remember the 10 tails was able to resurrect fully even though it didn't have all of the biju fully absorbed. shit im putting wayyyy to much theory an thought into this lol anyway keep up the hard work!

I can't understand how a jounin can be so easilt defeated. It would be nice if you added mkre aspects in the plan. Like how does a kunai can easily strike an S rank ninja, I amnt saying it Isn't possible but you could improve these parts or even add a speech where Lirn goes on about how he was caught off guard.

Loved how you used Haku's past to make himbtryband connectvwith Gaara. Niceway of writing the fights too.

Nice fic, there should be more reviews, follows and favorites. There are some inconsistencies but overall its an awesome and sort of uniqur fic. Cant wait for the next chapter.

I liked how you incorporated Lee's drunken fist in the chunin exams and had him give Naruto a run for his money. It's a nice fic andbI imagine the next chapters are good too.

Damn, this was one hell of a chapter, the fights were well Written too.

The chapter felt a bit too rushed and didn’t show Kakashi train them that muc, it would be nice if you showed what Kakashi trained them and how.

Awesome! This chapter was real good. Can't wait to see what is up Obitos's sleeve

Your making it a point to get my blood pumping huh? another edge of my seat chapter that had me hyped up lol my only only complaint was that this chapter seemed to be on the short side. still the writing was impeccable and you put enough details where they needed to be. I felt like I was witnessing the fights first hand.

Good rewrite. Keep up tje good work

This chapter got me hyped! Can't see the next one. Keep up the good work.

its great!

Pat123, Well actually I had to update the chapter because of numerous grammatical errors, and that must have caused it to show up as a new chapter. Sorry.

this is the third time you upload the same chapter