| Reviews for January 2016 |
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latoyamackey69 chapter 7 . 11/21/2019 Please update soon I've literally fell in love with this story all of them so please update soon |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2018 Wow you sure know how to make the agents incompetent. It’s not believable. Stop being a fucking lazy fucking writer. It’s embarrassing. |
CMNCISCM chapter 7 . 7/28/2018 Please write more! |
Spooladio chapter 7 . 3/19/2018 Loved the chapter. Refreshing viewpoint. I personally want to see the interaction between Emily and her mom. In addition, to reveal the identity of Emily’s Dad. That would tie up some loose ends since neither attended her funeral. |
Spooladio chapter 6 . 12/27/2017 Very nice update. I love how you made the team relive that period from Emily’s perspective. I always thought that Emily left the team subtle clues regarding what was going on. The Morgan and Reid’s attitude was always a little to sanctimonious. Emily gave them a lot of clues: 1). the spreadsheet with the spy names 2) left her gun and badge so they could easily see she was gone 3) left her safe open with her passport 4). Dropped the ring in the toilet knowing it didn’t flush 5) shot Fahey in the ear enough for him to be detained and question It would be nice for each of the team members to re-examine their point of view during this time. Hindsight is 20/20. Again, nice job. |
CHParker201 chapter 6 . 12/25/2017 I love how you decided to let the team see it all first hand! It’s not something you would think of as a form of torture yet it works perfectly well! I’m so happy to find a fellow OUAT and CM watcher, hard to find these days ️ Keep up the good work! |
LottyCharl chapter 1 . 5/30/2017 Please write more |