I ADORE THIS
PLEASE CONTINUE

Its almost September and I STILL love reading this fic! The concept is so cute and I think Ive read this three times already. I hope you can look back and write another chapter :3

I CANNOT WAIT FOR PLAYDATE!

Huh. I wonder what the thought was to give Shiro a twin. Interesting addition to the character. I don't mind it but it's interesting since you could have just made Keith his brother or his adopted brother. Also, your sibling interactions are a joy to read since they seem so genuine. :)

I'm glad that Lance already likes Shiro and that there's no animosity between anybody here. Good feels all around. I'm happy that Lance and Allura had a sibling moment together to actually talk.

I cannot wait for Shiro to explain to everyone else he has a kid that he didn't even know about until today LMAO

Favorite part of this chapter was the lines: "A shadow passed over Shiro's face and he brought his hand up to his mouth. It looked like he was struggling to find the right words, but eventually he nodded and looked up at her. There were a lot of emotions in those dark eyes of his, and Allura looked away." I want to know more about the incident that claimed his arm and how he will relay that trauma to Allura when they're both more comfortable with each other. Like I said before, your pacing is really good. I wish the chapters were a bit longer but the places you stop it at also feel right.

Omg your characterization of Matt and Lance is HILARIOUS and on point! Emi's an adorable imp.

I'm REALLY liking the switch of POV so I can see the compare and contrast between Allura and Shiro. Loving this! Also, everything seems to be going on a really good pace! It's not slow, nor is it fast. This is great!

Love the start of this already! Modern AU shallura and a mature look on them as older adults with struggles and a kid is a premise I'm happy to read! Can't wait to read more.

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PLEASE UPDATE SOOMNNNN

This is so cute! I'm loving it so much so far! Emi is adorable

I feel like nothing much happens in your chapters, but the interactions are so realistic and full of little details that each one seems like a lot. I cannot wait for the next!

Keep writing!

Oh my gosh this story is freaking adorable! I totally love it!

I like that they could talk like adults. I like that Lance is there for his sister and niece. This had a good pace to it, which can be hard to find and harder to keep at times. I'm enjoying this quite a bit.