Come on Jack fangs and claws! FANGS AND CLAWS!

USE THEM!

Thank you for the new chapter, you just made my day! Can't wait for what happens next!

When he makes you cum just by eating you out! Ok but I really need to know what that electrical charge was. Is Megatron catching feelings~? I know you're busy with other stories and I love those too so I will wait AS LONG AS I HAVE TO

Is there going to be love triangle? Pairing would be:
Mainly it would be the lord of decepticon X megatron's (beloved(not yet) cohort
One-sided with:
Soundwave X Jack (mainly because I think would be like soundwave starts to develop a feeling on Jack)

I read this fanfiction "Harry Potter and the Slytherin's Heirs" by strawberrywhippedcreamfreaked...
So I was thinking Jack is the loving mother of the children, sparkmates (Jacky-boy neutral-hate on megatron (he'll just think megatron the father children only, loyal to him but never really love him). He showed kindness towards his sparkmate's decepticon and all others except megatron.
Megatron just trying to get Jack's love for him...although his mate is loyal to but it's not enough for him.
Soundwave just like a babysitter for Jack but after guarding jack for so long he's begin to start a feelings towards Jack...

Wow just found this story. Love it!

Megatron the tyrant is gonna work hard to keep Jack in his possession with plans and cunning, he probably has a few plans in the making for jack now depending on his moods but I wonder if he will use toys, later on, to make jack use on himself since Megatron all about control and power I bet worse he makes jack ride him since I bet Megatron know he hates it

Wow, is Megsy falling in love on Valentine's Day?! I too didn't expect this. Lovely gift for the season all the same!

Ffnet is eating (some of) the alerts again...

“Donation,” is that what the kids are calling it these days?

“I’m tired,” Really, Jack? Try telling him you have a headache next time, maybe he’ll accept that excuse.

...I don’t know why I thought Megatron was actually going to feed Jack first, maybe make a game out of it. I’m now vaguely worried that he’s going to make Jack reciprocate going down instead. Fill a spare (hopefully there’s a spare) inseminator with energon?

Huh, so much for kissing being a wretched tradition organically have.

I look forward to Megatron’s next PoV, I’m interested in what’s going on in his head.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

Poor Jack. I feel for him. Thou I've ever gone through it. But yeah. :(

This is getting good! i can't wait for the next chapter.

Fucking Shockwave being a dick as always. Work is finally slowing down so I get to read fanfiction again! I'm always amazed by how well you capture Shockwave's personality and can explain the scientific aspects of this story in a logical way.

Holy shit they actually did it. Well, I didn't really doubt they would but still! I wonder how many tries it's going to take Megatron to knock Jack up. Thanks for the chapter!

Why must my baby boy suffer like this?! Great work on this chapter love it!

Shockwave's creepy obsession continues to be a constant in this 'verse, and Megatron's just going to indulge him, because of course he is. Shockwave'll probably get first dibs on Jack after Megatron and maybe Predaking.

Megatron- Megatron, no.

I am concerned that Jack slept through being moved. What else could be done to him while he sleeps?

Is Jack trying the same thing he did in Logic? Because Megatron's a lot more savvy than Shockwave, I don't think that that would end well.

"Though at this point in time I find you'd try to rip my helm off than clean it."

He knows! (Also, "at this point in time"? Anticipating Stockholm Syndrome already?)

And some animals eat their young. Some mothers kill their children. I wonder if Shockwave has considered those possibilities?

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

wow I wonder if Jack relationship will be twice as messed up then Starscream with Megatron in the long run I mean jack cause some strife but so many others and puts up with Starscream would make Megatron angry I guess Jack an outlet for many things then just revenge... scary though there.