I love this chapter for the wealth of character progression. Both Will and Louisa are learning how to interact with each other honestly, Will especially. And thank you for such a well written apology scene. I think a lot of people, not just authors, struggle with these and your’s touched on all the right points - even Will’s own confusion over his behavior. I sincerely hope you continue this story as I’d love to see this version of the characters evolve. Thanks for writing.

Georgina is absolutely right, an apology can go along way. In fact, truly, sometimes a sincere apology is all it takes. Emphasis on SINCERE.

Suuuure Will, she’s not mad at all because your behavior was completely appropriate. I’m truly glad for this chapter.

This is an excellent story but every time I read this chapter, the fact that Will doesn’t drive Louisa home bugs the crap out of me! Dude?! You were rude, condescending, and pompous, the least you could do is make sure she gets home okay. Great job author, because the only reason I care so much is that you hit the right pitch for the characters.

Awwww update please!

I'm really enjoying this _ can't wait to binge the rest heheheheheh

Continue?
Please?

Well, you definitely go to my favorites.
Your story is so exquisite and easy to read and understand that the ten chapters flew by.
It is the first "me before you" story that is definitely enchanted.
I'll be waiting for the update.
Goodbye

New Zealander! New Zealander! That sweet boy is Australian through and through. One of the original River Boys of Summer Bay. Blood and Sand all the way!

But this is really good, very well done!

please update i love this story so far

Please Update this is my favorite story so far and I really want to get to the part where they are a couple and in love

And so the story of them falling in love begins, no?

Can wait for the next chapter,

Update soon

Great story. I like the jokes

Can't wait to see the development now that they are in good terms again.

LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!