you lost me there

Really good chapter. My favorite Percy Jackson book is The Titans Curse. I always thought Percy/Thalia was a better pairing than Percy/Annabeth because they were so alike and different at the same that they just fit.

Once again, a good chapter. And for your question, I know this isn't really an answer, however I don't really have a best book. Honestly I love all the books but I haven't read up on them lately... if I was going to pick then it'd be the Lightning Thief because it's the book that brought me into the Percy Jackson series in the first is an interesting character, and I'm not too sure about him as of right now, but he does add a lot of intrigue into the story. Also, I'm glad that you took my suggestion on the 1,500 words to heart, I can almost feel the difference in length, ya know? Lol, have a good one.

Once again, a good chapter. And for your question, I know this isn't really an answer, however I don't really have a best book. Honestly I love all the books but I haven't read up on them lately... if I was going to pick then it'd be the Lightning Thief because it's the book that brought me into the Percy Jackson series in the first is an interesting character, and I'm not too sure about him as of right now, but he does add a lot of intrigue into the story. Also, I'm glad that you took my suggestion on the 1,500 words to heart, I can almost feel the difference in length, ya know? Lol, have a good one.

The pairing should be Percy/Thalia. They're connected through the visions and have similar personalities.

Great chapter man! I absolutely loved it. This story is statring to be real interesting.
As for the pairing, I think Percy/Thalia will be great. Since they both are hearing that voice in their heads, maybe they can find out about it together. :D
My favourite book is HoH too! I really loved it, too bad after alk that action, Percy and Annabeth didn't get to do anything in BoO , was really disappointed:(.

Nice

Hey again! The chapters are coming out steady and still looking good, and for the end of the chapter question I think Percy and Calypso is one of the most likely pairings, seeing as he was literally on an island with her and he wanted to stay but felt he had a duty to go back and finish the war. Anyway, thanks for giving me a mention before, and by the way for further notice I am a guy lol. Have a good night/day.

I like you idea for this story, but you need to work on your grammar. Many sentences, not just in this chapter, have no clear meaning.

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorn scratch that Hell hath no fury like a pissed off thalia

Thalia/Percy is pretty realistic

Percy and Calypso or Percy and Reyna or Percy and Rachel, Also thanks for noticing my review

I subscribe at the border line of it. Percy is smart for all the Amazon by ways he manages to get out of but him being dumb is why we all love him his funny and caring and gets into trouble for his stupid mistakes like we do I mean his dumbness makes him the classic hero that we all love while his smart part is the ways he manages to find out a way to escape or win

*Hey Mr. Author who's name I just checked is Ryan.