It’s so cute u should keep it going! OwO

Didn't you post this on tumblr? Like i don't care for the site but i'm just asking. I mean the only reason i even look at tumblr is because of Zoophobia. But still this was great, also if you want to check out Predators of kilimanjaro, if you want to. Also are you gonna post part 3 ob tumblr or on this site? Just PM me or leave it in a A/N in chapter 3. But still this was cool. See you in chapter 3.

so cute

Nice idea but make sure to work on your grammer, sometimes throughout the story your missing commas and co-signs for words. Also try looking at other stories to know how to write when someone's talking cause i could read it but it was difficult, but still this was nice, see you in chapter 2.