Reviews for The Family that Never Was
Scousedancer chapter 8 . 8/29/2019
Of course Kurt & Jane's daughter is a daredevil, what else would she be?
Guest chapter 8 . 8/25/2019
Love this! Hope there’s a real Jeller Baby in Season 5.
Scousedancer chapter 7 . 9/6/2017
Really happy to see Jane & Kurt are slowly learning to forgive one another . Hopefully Jane will eventually forgive him enough to return to New York, and maybe allow him to be a proper husbamd and father
Scousedancer chapter 6 . 9/6/2017
I hope this means Jane is softening towards Kurt, who obviously loves being a Dad to Zoey, and goes without saying he loves Jane
BlueTigress chapter 7 . 9/3/2017
great chapter! :) they're just perfect for each other
BlueTigress chapter 6 . 8/31/2017
great chapter!
Scousedancer chapter 5 . 8/24/2017
Love the scenes with Zoey & Kurt, he's such a loving father, hopefully he can convince Jane he can be just as loving a husband.
Annie chapter 5 . 8/20/2017
sweet times...wonder why Jane is sad...hope you will continue
BlueTigress chapter 5 . 8/21/2017
whata cute daddy daughter moment!
BlueTigress chapter 4 . 7/28/2017
great chapter! the climb really symbolizes their life's, the chase and the point where they are right now. her running from him
lshd chapter 4 . 7/27/2017
I was wondering if they were going to give Jane and Kurt a baby in the two year time jump. I can't see them doing it during the show because their job is so physical, it would hinder the story line. If they had, I can't imagine her leaving the baby behind and she always thought Kurt would be a great father so I can't see her taking the baby from him...Too confusing for me. I'll just have to enjoy your vision and appreciate your efforts. Thanks for sharing.
Elislin chapter 1 . 7/27/2017
Ooh I like the start of this story! Can't wait to read more!
Scousedancer chapter 4 . 7/27/2017
Jane really needs Kurt a better explanation than "Its your fault", because he loved her enough to find her & for someone who claims to be happy without him, she doesn't seem like it! On the contrary, she appears to love him just as much as before
Danari88 chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
I like your story idea a lot. It's plausible that when Jane found out she was pregnant let fear of something happening to their baby and so she ran. I also love the idea of them having a cute, friendly little girl together. It's hard for me to stay in the story though, because you've made her way too old for her age of almost 2. She wouldn't stand nearly as tall as Jane's waist and she would only be able to string together about 20 two-word phrases, and those are simple, easy-to-say words- and that's if she had above average communication skills. Also, it's very out of character for Kurt to be okay with Jane making him essentially beg for her to come home or talk her into it. She's run off and hidden his child from him. As much as he loves her and would be relieved to find her, he would still be very hurt and upset with her, and would be looking for her to be remorseful and ask for his forgiveness. Kurt is not a pushover and he was the one wronged here. I hope you can take this constructive criticism in the helpful way it was meant. I would never want to upset or discourage a writer. I look forward to reading more fics from you. Thanks.
MarySBarros chapter 2 . 5/28/2017
Look, a 1yo cannot talk like that... Not even geniuses can.
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