I found that the elements of the story such as the characters and the plot were placed quite slowly. It was different from the stories I'm used to reading but it wasn't unpleasant. Moreover, I feel like serious matters will start, now that the Horde has the Light.
Poor Monique, she doesn't know yet that things became complicated for Barry... what did she get herself into and how will she be of help to Barry?
At present, I see why the alters behaved with Monique like they did. Actually, their behaviour saddened me a little because they had been happy to finally meet Monique and yet, they had rapidly pushed her away warning her to not get involved in their problems.
I will certainly leave other comments later, even if I doubt their usefulness. In addition, I wish you a good day ;)

I have mixed feelings about Monique's friendship with Barry. On the one hand, he's such a good friend because he tries to make her more confident by convicing her to wear dresses to emphasize her. In addition, Barry makes sure she takes the right decisions even if they are hard to follow.
On the other hand, she feels the need to lie partly because of Barry's mental health condition. I pointed out ''partly'' because she's the one who decided twice not to tell Terrence when it concerns Barry.
I'm really curious to know how will Terrence react when he'll learn more about Barry...

Wow! Barry told her!
I found him very brave to let Monique know the truth about him. If I were him, I think that I woudn't have the strength to do so.
I think she's right not to tell Terrence yet about Barry's secret until she processes herself his DID.

It's really a pleasure to read your story
I'm lucky to have so many chapters left to read straight through XD

I found it rough the way Barry designated Hedwig, Dennis and Patricia as unecessary anymore. I feel sad for Hedwig because he's a child who will never have the opportunity to have a friend of his age. On the other hand, I have a bad feeling about what he did. When Hedwig said ''I would do a bunch of stuff'', I knew something was going to be off. x'D
I understand Terrence's concern for Monique. Not only he doesn't know who Barry is, but also he's been used to ''have'' Monique for himself since she's very shy and doesn't like interacting that much with people.
I'm looking forward to know what happened to Barry? What prevent him from attending the meeting?

Hello! I've just started reading your story. Actually, I've already read 3 fanfic related to Split and Glass universe, and I have to say that I really like the fact that this one contains new characters and seems to put more attention to Barry.
Terrence looks like a gentle boyfriend. That's why I'm curious to know how will Monique fall in love with another person although she's got a very caring boyfriend.
I'm eager to know what happens next and learn more about this alternative universe

Terrance vs beast

Soooo freaking good! I had a feeling you were going to implement the girls. This is a nice twist that I (sorta) wished M. Knight would of added in the movie but all is well. Wonderful job! I cannot wait to see how you tie all of this together!

Very good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Very good chapter, I admit I didn't see Patricia letting her see the room coming or getting shoved inside. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see how she interacts with the girls and also with Dennis as things progress.

Very good story, I've really enjoyed reading it so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Yes she now meet him for a moment I thought she was going to be kidnapped since he texted her the address that was a good chapter

When will she find out that Barry is not in control

Now that they have the light what will happen with her how will those three take to her please update again soon

jiayou i love this continue with the good work

I wonder who is trying to take the light can't wait to find out