I loved it lol its a perfect combo of good humor and sweet sexy goodness that is actually hot. Well written
P.s. i have no other way to share ideas on here but i was rewatching the final season of ft last night and got an idea from larcades pleasure magic. He uses his magic around the same time lucy is naked laying ontop natsu. If she became affected by it like everyone else, including mavis even, i thought maybe it could wake up natsu? haha. Larcade could still be taken out by sting soon after but i thought it was a good prompt someone should know about!

I loved it, you should add more chapters

this was hysterical omgggggggggggggg i can't handle it, i'm laughing. i like this one

Holy CRAP I loved it!
Its so hot, even though its a ridiculous situation for natsu to be in!

lol nice job!

haha! Well written smut ;)

This was... Something else lol. The story line was amazing I give it a 9/10 because it should've had another chapter. Please do another chapter! Probably the shower scene? Gosh I'm such a perv

“Your penis reveals your deceit” I can’t at that part lmao

after I read the first paragraph:

LMFAO

That was magnificent.

My brain went to the meme of the clown in the sewer saying “Want penis enlargement pills?”

This gets me everytime XD OMG. The sheer humour in this is gold. Love it so much!

Welll... IT'S THE COMPLETE OPPOSITE OF A TRAINWRECK! You did REALLY good! And tbh I thought you wrote and captured the characters greatly. Though, I would've liked if you wrote that at the end of the story Happy and Charle (and Wendy if you felt like it) came to the house and saw a small part of Natsu and Lucy doing what they doing. But that's just my thought/suggestion. Overall rate: 9/10

I don’t know how I feel about this fic and I think that means there is a something wrong with me. But is was well written so there at least I can agree with myself on that.

Use of Words: 10/10
Plot: 9.50/10
Story Flow: 9/10
Overall: 9.50/10

-Lucy was kind of a slut here, she was a bit OOC, but a wonderful story nonetheless