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Not bad.

Great start. Hope you continue making chapters.

Lee doesn't have an aptitude for taijutsu. He just works really hard.

There is so many angsty gamer stories, the one story where the mc have an actual ability to NEGATE angst. It's just so weird. There is no such thing as 'overpowering' the 'gamer's mind'. It just doesn't happen.

I have been looking for a story like this forever. Hope you keep up the great work

your concept of a beta sounds more like a co-writer to me. i always thought of betas as someone who will proof-read and suggest fixes and hopefully catch potential mistakes (for example, you would 'live' to have a beta?).

That aside, not being an experienced writer, I don't feel I could do more than catch things. Hope you find someone good.

Bro, if you help with a project of mine (not on here; it's on Inkitt) I'll beta your entire story for you, no questions asked.

Atypical. It has a lot of potential. I will be following ts story to see where it goes.

I really like this so far! Great job and keep it up! :)

sure

For god sake use "Speak marks" for when someone is speaking, not 'Apostrophe' those are for thinking

hope to see more!

Not bad but I notice chapte seems to be the same...
Also notice that there wasn't any [Level] indicator, a Gamer fic without a level system would be fun to read for once :D

Interesting concept. But I wonder how you will make Lee take the world by storm if his stats will increase at a very slow pace. Waiting for the next chapter. Hopefully, it will be a lengthier one with 5k to 10k words.