| Reviews for Clockwork Heart |
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Guest chapter 20 . 7/12/2019 This story is really nice glad I found it :) |
Lady Canu chapter 20 . 2/25/2019 I absolutely loved this story. The writing made it really easy to immerse yourself into this AU (and I want to say that initially thought that Ash being a robot would be weird but it still ended up being our weird Ash we know and that is super adorable.) and root for each character as if it were canon. Take care and keep writing! |
Lykos chapter 19 . 11/2/2018 It sounded like the beginning of the Hoopa movie. Serena didn't have a Delphox, she still doesn't, but other than that, thay's what it sounded like. |
TheMusicKeeper chapter 20 . 9/18/2018 I'm honestly sad that I haven't read this wonderful story sooner. It's such a miraculous spin on their universe, and you capture the characters and events so well. I felt like I was actually watching a Pokémon eposide with all it's little quirks, comedy, and suspense! You not only wrote a wonderful fan fiction full of detail and emotion; you wrote a truly inspiring adventure with every character given their own spotlight to shine in their own ways that fit so wonderfully with the story you were telling. You did a fantastic job- this was certainly worth the two years of effort. The planning and writing and re-writing. I will certainly come back and read this again and again- one of my new favorite Pokémon XY stories~. |
Skarloeyisyoung chapter 3 . 7/7/2018 Interesting |
1310 chapter 20 . 1/8/2018 This AU is awesome! With a dose Diodeshipping and a good plot, you’ve made this into a very great story! A big Kudos to you Author-san! I hope to see more of your great fics! (And possibly a sequel of this and more Diodeshipping fics... Heheh) |
Moon-9215 chapter 20 . 10/14/2017 i read all the story, i loved it, i hope you make a sequel |
Chiya Neera chapter 20 . 8/23/2017 I feel like, with this kind of story, I have to give more support than just favourite-ing it. So here, have a review! This fic really should be more popular, I think the diodeshipping's putting people off (which is a shame because 1) it can be read without the ship in mind and 2) diodeshipping should be more popular), because you write really well and I love the idea and basically the entire plot! And you handled some of the darker themes while still keeping the story relatively light-hearted, which I must commend you for! I'd gush at you some more but I are bad at the wordy things, so just know that this fic made me really happy and you deserve a lot more praise. As for scenes, uh, I don't actually have much knowledge of the anime past Sinnoh, but maybe you could do a scene introducing Serena to the group? I'm interested to see how the team dynamic differs with their different origins and all. If you want to, I mean. Anyway, keep up the good work! |
we.can.fly.away.to.Gallifrey chapter 20 . 8/15/2017 Wow, what an amazing and professional story! It was truly awe-inspiring! Many thanks! |
lunequireve chapter 20 . 8/2/2017 This was an absolutely amazing story, thank you so much for writing it! The action was wonderfully paced and the parts that were meant to tug at one's heartstrings, well they were perfectly written. Thank you again for sharing this with everyone and I hope you have a great day! |
LoneAdvocate chapter 20 . 7/13/2017 Longest "Diodeshipping" story ever(?) but worth it. Nice to have some story depth with this topic. Nice work, even tho I wasn't a fan of Ash being a robot at first. Keep it up. |
Shining-Aura chapter 20 . 7/12/2017 won't let me sign in for some reason so I'll have to guest review. :( This fic was super adorable! I loved the relationship between Ash Clemont and Bonnie. It was so cute that Ash had a hard time grasping the concept of "happy tears" I naaaawwwwwww'd everytime he freaked out at someone crying. I can't really think of any scenes right now, so just write what you want. Once I get back into my account this is going straight into my faves! |
ShiningAura chapter 4 . 7/11/2017 Woah! I mention how wrong it feels to see Ash without Pikachu and who happens to show up in the next chapter? Ask and you shall receive I guess XD. What's that scar about though? That's worrisome. :( I hope they become friends soon. |
ShiningAura chapter 3 . 7/11/2017 Awww, man this is just too adorable! I never thought that Ash would make such a cute robot. lol It feels wrong seeing Ash without Pikachu even in an AU but still this is a cute story way to go!. Welp, time to read more. |
Sapphiria chapter 20 . 7/11/2017 Awesome. Loved this and thanks for the hug. If I may can I request a scene from the episode before Ash and Clemont's battle with the copying of Clembot? I can't remember it's name but I would love to see how that fits into the universe. Good luck with any future endeavours and thank you for writing this. |