| Reviews for Broken Bird |
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Bravogoodsir chapter 1 . 5/3 Ive been following your challenge story. Since your the latetest pooster in my cue decided to see your other works. if you have time for your muse Id say give us another chapter or 20... Either our good work dant wait for another post to distract a few minutes |
Right What Is Wrong chapter 10 . 1/13/2019 Presumably the conceit of keeping ideas from Naruto is that the Kyuubi is too blindly hateful to plan out its actions ahead of time. Otherwise... yeah, this is pretty accurate. Sweet-talk the kid and bait him into viewing you as a friend as a loss-leader for getting revenge on absolutely everyone else. Heck, even Shukaku probably pulled that, since later retcons made it clear that wasn't actually his mtoher's spirit influencing him. So why is Shukaku smarter than Kurama? |
StefanosM chapter 10 . 4/11/2018 Wow, great job so far! Can't wait for more! A very original take on narutoverse. |
GooLord chapter 10 . 12/16/2017 Love your story! Also you may already know this but naruto’s seal is on his stomach, not his chest. The authors note at the end of this chapter kinda made me think you thought it was on his chest so if I’m wrong and you already knew sorry. |
GooLord chapter 9 . 12/16/2017 Lol poor haku. |
GooLord chapter 6 . 12/16/2017 Uuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhgggggggg I reeeeeeaaaalllllllyyyyy don’t like sakuraaaaaaaa... but I guess I’ll deal, just this once though!(biggest lie I’ve ever told) also I forgot about shikamaru last chapter, I feel like he would make a good hokage if it weren’t for his laziness. |
GooLord chapter 5 . 12/16/2017 Next hokage after Fugaku? Hmm, well there’s not a lot of potential in the academy seeing as Naruto is not present and Sasuke likely will not show up. That leaves the third best, who would probably be...! Oh god either Lee or Neji XD I would love to see Lee as hokage! |
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 10 . 10/13/2017 OOOOOOO! This is so intense and absolutely amazing! I love it! I can't wait to see what will happen next! How will Kakashi respond? And what about Jiraiya! Oooooooo exciting! |
JoeyT12 chapter 10 . 10/8/2017 Oh god. Oh god. What do they do now? I really NEED to know. Right now... or as soon as I can at least... no, I was right the first time. RIGHT NOW! |
skatingandcruzing chapter 10 . 10/8/2017 oh boy. But actually though, such a big plot hole on why Kurama never manipulated Naruto about his past and the villagers hating him despite it...hmmmm |
Shadow.SSJ chapter 10 . 10/8/2017 I missed a couple chapters it seems. Sorry! I liked the fact that Haku trained Menma _ Now Kurama has something planned for little Menma. Oups! I mean Naruto. Let's hope Kurama will get around and be a Ally and friend to Naruto. |
BorderLand chapter 10 . 10/8/2017 Yes Kyuubi is a better teacher than Jiraya |
skatingandcruzing chapter 9 . 10/2/2017 this. is. so cute! Haku and Naruto actually having bonding time. and drunk kakashi with drunk zabuza who decide they're just gonna do whatever they want because gato does not deserve anything. |
JoeyT12 chapter 9 . 10/2/2017 Lol, Poor Haku. Haha. |
skatingandcruzing chapter 8 . 9/29/2017 Kakashi vs Zabuza drinking game! |