You need a beta.

Hey. Was that your mother sucking cock behind the dumpster near the grocer store? Regardless, hope you kill yourself. Go diddle yourself in the corner, while your mother completely disregards you.

I like it a lot, to bad over a year there no update

Nice fanfic I always like Kaguya X Naruto

Nice story! It was fun to read!

This is a really brilliant take on the Infinite Tsukuyomi. I really appreciate this read.

Gods in heaven…this was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. In fact, it was not just beautiful, but sublime and poignant as well. My favourite parts were the confession (of course!), as well as the final few chapters showing Naruto and Kaguya's awkward, fumbling, growing romance, Kaguya's softening, and the interactions between father and daughter. Incredible work, and i'm really looking forward to the next piece.

Does Sasuke still have access to the other Bijuu’s power? If not, I don’t see why Naruto couldn’t handle him as is. Naruto half of Kurama Sasuke 8 and a half bijuu. Honestly just a nitpick, I’m really enjoying the story so far

Amazing, short yet one of the most intrigueing, enticing and satisfying stories ive ever read. The flow of everything was perfect. Great job with this

Beautiful story

This is confusing and gives me a lot of different feelings.

This is the absolute best Naruto story I've found in the last 2 years. It's just such a satisfying story!

Ok this is a wonderfully story

wonderful how wonderful great

well this is beautiful great