| Reviews for The Original Origin |
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   KingOfEternity chapter 6 . 3/6 i wonder what shirou's reaction to jack will be? should be interesting |
| jameswillow.jam chapter 3 . 2/14 that a hellsing abridged reference |
| stormsyaf chapter 6 . 10/28/2019 You are a hidden gem. Why are you stories not getting all the likes is beyond me. This is the first shirou who used the first magic. I didn't even know about his first origin before the fuyuki fire. Hope you continue and please shirou x jeanne |
| sondowth chapter 6 . 9/24/2019 Please update this story soon |
| sonic chapter 6 . 6/25/2019 Good Chapter! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/19/2019 Would have been nice if this continued, but all good fanfics always die. Especially this one...it lasted ONE month that’s just fucking sad. |
| sugoijack9 chapter 4 . 3/4/2019 F*ck you Sieg. This Holy Maiden belong to Shirou! |
| sugoijack9 chapter 3 . 3/4/2019 What a pickle |
| SnappingFlower chapter 6 . 8/5/2018 Yeeeaaaahhhhhhhh... This is... interesting. I'm looking forward for more. ~Snappy~ |
| Pedro52 chapter 3 . 6/25/2018 awesome |
| paratayun chapter 6 . 4/12/2018 I'm excited to see how Shirou would fight usingbhis magic. I hope you continue this. |
| rc48177 chapter 6 . 4/2/2018 I hope this is continued one day |
| Stratos263 chapter 6 . 2/26/2018 This grail war will be interesting |
| Stratos263 chapter 5 . 2/26/2018 Well Jeanne got quite the shock for the info dumped on her |
| Stratos263 chapter 4 . 2/26/2018 Good luck shirou and jeanne |
