| Reviews for Krum Do I Love? |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2017 I am a 100% proud dramione fan. And omg Draco is absolutely amazing! I'm in love with this fan fic. Please please please do more writing! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/1/2015 Your writing style is really good, but you put so many twists and turns into this story that it went from confusing to boring pretty fast. I mean, honestly, I can't even count how many times a character has faced off with deatheaters just to be captured again. It's inconsistent and tiresome. I recommend you write out the plot next time because you truly are a fantastic writer, you just have a hard time focusing. |
 Teithril chapter 5 . 5/11/2014 I am loving this series you have written and wanted to encourage you to keep writing. So with that in mind, you asked for any grammatical errors or suggestions. The only place that stuck out as kind of oddly worded was in the beginning when you were describing the tables. Instead of wording it as you have (four long tables and a fifth table smaller separated...), I would suggest wording it in a way that is easier for the reader to read and understand, such as "four long tables and a smaller fifth table separated...". This way you immediately know that the fifth table is smaller and separated instead of having to stop for a moment and rearrange the words to make the sentence make more sense. I am enjoying this fic immensely! Keep up the good work! Even though this fix is completed, hope the review helps with any future fics. |
| Ecila chapter 1 . 5/28/2013 And here, we see the beginnings of the site's first Dramione fanfic! |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 8 . 8/12/2012 Sooo Harry may get the girl? |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 7 . 8/12/2012 Uh ah he can't die |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 6 . 8/12/2012 Sooo u don't like Draco... Fair enough it's a great love square tho! |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 5 . 8/12/2012 Soo is Draco good or bad? |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 4 . 8/12/2012 Read, and here's my review! |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 3 . 8/12/2012 Ohh noooo |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 2 . 8/11/2012 LOVEEE it! |
| miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 1 . 8/11/2012 Wow Ron not wanting to eat? I loveeee it! I loveeee love triangles |
| KNDnumbuh007 chapter 5 . 6/4/2012 Before I continue on I just have to thank you for not making lucius a cold hearted monster. I mean, in the book they make him caring for his family and I'm just glad you didn't have him crucio Draco or whatever the hell the other fanfictions do. Seriously, they had Lucius beat him, rape him, or hit him with spells but you get my rant. |
| Alexandra E. Malfoy chapter 1 . 5/17/2012 Really nice. :) |
| Emmalex-Watson chapter 9 . 5/12/2012 HAHA that book title was the funniest thing i have heard/read all week. At first I thought Hermione forgot the title but the "oh" was actually in there hahaha |
