Reviews for Choosing Unwisely |
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JadeSpeedster17 chapter 1 . 3/5 No, but it is your fault for being how you are. War may be war, but if you are so paranoid as you are now to leave another to die. Then, well, this resistance shall fall apart at the seams. I suppose it's true, the death eaters won, because the people going against them really are just as much of morons as Dumbledore made them to be. |
ripper34 chapter 1 . 1/29 Good story |
Right What Is Wrong chapter 1 . 1/5 ""And we are not" Remus said gently. "We are just going to…set you free. You're on your own."" Hm. Thought you were going to give her a REAL case of karma and Obliviate away her entire life, leaving her in a different country with a false identity, no documents, and no idea what was wrong. This almost seems too merciful - she might be able to make it, after all, if she stops crying and starts thinking. I'm a hopeless optimist/sentimentalist and hope Winky is lying about what REALLY happened - that is, she took Harry's body but found out he was alive, resuscitated him, and quickly arranged for them to go to Gringotts, whereupon he managed to bribe goblins into listing him as officially dead and skedaddled before the Death Eater showed up to verify his death. After all, it's DH, and Ron's Killing Curse might have only killed off the Horcrux. Good story, if very dark. |
jon12231223 chapter 1 . 3/19/2019 Love this story |
gginsc chapter 1 . 1/26/2019 Great story. Very believable Hermione. |
Monster King chapter 1 . 10/16/2018 Great story |
This guy doesnt have a clue chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 Good story |
mobulis chapter 1 . 8/26/2018 Voldemort can still be defeated. |
MadMadMaud chapter 1 . 6/22/2018 You really need to learn how to curse properly. Blocks of symbols don't add anything and just detract from the flow of the story. Either shit or get off the pot. Don't half ass it. |
Snowball1982 chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 Spot on! |
Millie chapter 1 . 6/23/2017 Ouch! Obviously the know-it-all didn't know it all. |
GBTtown chapter 1 . 6/4/2017 Sad. |
Charlie0925 chapter 1 . 5/25/2017 Dang, I loved this fic but hated Hermione, lol! ;o) |
Nova chapter 1 . 5/17/2017 Good stories like this are so hard to find. Where bad shit happens and there is no great big hero or rescue, just resigned defeat and hope for escape. You don't want to read them too often but when you do they usually only half deliver, at least for me |
teedub chapter 1 . 5/16/2017 I really like this story. Yes, weasley bashing but the bashing wasn't too repetitive. Very realistic and more in line as to what would happen given canon events, even without Ron and Bill's betrayal. |