I know Victor's supposed to be spontaneous, but he's pushing it with that invitation

Yuuri seems to be warming up to Yuri. It's a shame that the opposite isn't true. Check your sentence structurebeing maliciously mean' would work better as 'being malicious').

Those two have an odd relationship. It's interesting

I'm still wondering why my son JJ just upped and yote himself out the window, but hopefully that'll be explained soon.

The fact that Victor finds Yuuri attractive no matter what role he's in is amusing.

Loving how long the chapters are. Again, some minor SPAG errors, but they're easy to sort. Your characterisation is perfect, particularly Yuri.

I love how close Victor and Yuri are, and it really shows in their behaviour. There are some minor SPAG errors, but nothing too awful. The powers are awesome!

God, what a hopeless feeling, being under Celestino’s thumb like that...

No my Yuris! They better be okay.

Oh my fucking hell, I despise that man. DESPISE! Just team up and beat the life out of the mofo! Something! T_T God I hate this helpless feeling... well done for capturing it!

I'm crying

VICTOR’S LOVE FOR YURI IS SO PURE. Best Gaussian/Dad/brother ever.

i just feel like yuuri will just be jumping from roof to roof dogging every single one of victor's attacks then turning around and smacking his butt at him while sticking out his tongue which is getting me to laugh for awhile

i still think that there names would be diff like yuuri's w/ no doubt would be Eros i don't know what Victor's name should be but i can feel a great one coming

Thank you for the chapter!