fuck this story is bad

hermione a neko, no explanation given
neville possessed by gindelwald who is dumbledore, no explanation given.

you cannot throw stuff like this out without any sort of background

What of Harry's animagus training and form?

The Magical world is about to find out what death and destruction are for being traitors.

Nice list. Love this story read it a few times please come back and finish it.

Add bastila Shan

When I first saw the list of names, my first thought was, POOR GUY, imagine trying to keep all these women happy, sheesh and what about when they have that "Time Of The Month" and what if they all had it at the same time! The after I calmed down and reread the list, I noted that there were other story titles mixed in with the names.
I'm all good now, on with the story.

:))

I really enjoyed this chapter, it's a good length too, I know I'm kinda late to the review party but keep it up I hope you'll reconsider having Tali in the group it's a very workable angle where you Harry can learn the technology needed to help get her out of the suit permanently or something like that

Why just maybe Tali Tali is awesome but this is a good start to what I hope is going to be a good story

And why did you decide to make this a chapter? You could of simply added in a second AN note and just mentioned that, creating new chapters just for things like this and not taking them down after a couple of weeks ends of giving a bad impression to new readers mostly in the sense that they think there is more chapters then there actually is.

I hope to see more!

Shitfic.

Please update soon i love this story please updates

Great story, hope to read more soon!

Well it looks like you he story is coming along nicely and I'm enjoying reading it. It does look like you still have too many girls in the harem, while I would love to see if you are capable of writing a story and still making it good with such a large harem. I hope it ultimately don't lead to it failing.

Obviously I don't know how all the crossover's and girls tie into the story, but if you took out a few of the crossover's as well as a few of the star wars women, I think you would be much better off.

Luminara, Lana and Darth Nox would be good ones to take out if I just look at it from face value. You could also replace Vette and Darth Nox with Darth Talon.

Anyways can't wait for the next chapter.