Great fic! My curiosity however- I know its kinda dark for something of the sort to be mentioned in Pokémon, but is it canon that Guzma went through that? I've seen a lot of works, writing and comics, where that was the case. Just a curiosity. Anyway, love the story!

Holy SHIT, dude. Once I started reading, I couldn't stop! This story is INCREDIBLE and I can't believe I didn't get to it sooner! First off, I love their entire dynamic and their interactions, and the dialogue is SPOT on. Your descriptions are just as detailed as they need to be, and the little nuances of their actions are REALLY well-written. I'm Jenny's girlfriend, btw, so I know exactly where this whole situation is comin' from :3c Your grammar is near-flawless, and your writing style is smooth and fun to read too! The whole fic had me shocked and saddened and laughing right along with these two goofs. Seriously, amazing job, and well worth the read and favorite.