Best chapter ever!

this was really great can't wait to read more.

This was really good, thanks for writing it. I love Angela in this. And I also like when Bella has at least some backbone, so this was a nice read.

Your writing is good but I feel like the first 10 chapters is completely unoriginal. it's all lifted straight out of New Moon so I found myself skipping a lot of it. I think maybe you could have started your story later in the book

hello I'm curious to read your story, so I'll follow it in order to read it later.

Oh my goodness I loved this story so so much! I loved that you kind of followed the story line with your own twist! And I loved the relationship between Paul and Bella even starting the moment just as in the book he was pissed that she had found out about them. Everything was perfect. Thank you for the great read!

This is well written and I think I will enjoy reading your fic. :) It may be a cultural thing or the way I was raised, but I never could understand how she can call her dad by his first name or be allowed not to go to school for a breakup. Several times in the series, she shows such disrespect for her elders. I think it goes beyond defiance. Anyway, none of that has any bearing on your fic, as it is an opinion toward the original work. And while I greatly enjoy the stories, those things always bother me a little. Hmm, I don't think I have ever put that into words before. Not sure why I feel the need to say them here.

love it

Wonderful story but slightly curious as to why you altered the characters so much, Paul went from being a billy-badass with anger issues and a player to 16 and seemingly innocent. Even in the books when he imprinted on Rachel he still struggles with his anger, Also he's like 19 in the books and Bella is 18 at this point in the books so the ages would make sense. And then with Jake, you entirely got rid of the love interest which would have added so much drama and depth. Focus on using what the characters already have and changing them slowly through the story and it'll make it much more captivating.
Low-key excuse my nosey ass and my unprecedented advice, much love tho

I loved it.

Thank you for sharing.

Please add more chapters to this book would love to see what happens with bella and paul

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Loved the story

Olease add more chapters to this book would love to see what happens with bella and Paul