| Reviews for Slave Girl |
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Tami Touchette chapter 9 . 11/3/2019 Still hoping you come back one day |
Kagome Chronicles chapter 9 . 11/14/2017 Great chap! Kagome is a badass. Can't wait to read more |
JulyyFire chapter 9 . 11/14/2017 OMG this chapter was awesome! I can't believe Ninken loved a priestess! It makes me hate him so much more that he killed her for power instead of just running away with her or something. But it makes so much sense that he hated priestesses so much and thought they were all on some kind of high horse. Great story. I love how you connect everything. update soon |
Talawolfgirl chapter 9 . 11/9/2017 very good, keep it up. |
Michael34 chapter 9 . 11/9/2017 Great story and looking forward to reading more sooner the later. Writing and storylines are good and character interaction too so just keep going please. Till next time |
SugarRos chapter 4 . 10/9/2017 Hi! Just came across your fic today and was very intrigued by the summery to check out what you have going on here. I really like it! The plot is very interesting, and I dig the fire demon's characterization. The characters are all very IC, you keep them true to what I'd consider their manga selves. :) Your descriptions are really well done, and your writing is precise and to the point. I also love the fact that you know your story and you're telling it. Every scene has a point and drives the plot forward. It's rare to see, but so far you do it well. I haven't finished reading what you have yet, so I'm going to continue and review again when I'm done, but in the meantime, I'm going to shoot you a quick PM. Great job on the story so far, looking forward to reading more after work today! |
Luna Of The Rainbow1 chapter 3 . 9/12/2017 Yessssssss omg I'm so happy |
windbreaking chapter 8 . 9/7/2017 I'm sold on Kagura now. |
LovelyLadyMarMar chapter 7 . 7/4/2017 Love it and i love Kairo can't wait for your next update! |
Kagome Chronicles chapter 7 . 7/4/2017 So happy I found this fic! Even after everything that happened, I love how Inuyasha is the same ol' Inuyasha! Seriously though, great fic! Update soon! |
Maddy chapter 7 . 7/4/2017 AWESOME CHAPTER! I wonder what's gonna happen now that Naraku is loose again |
windbreaking chapter 7 . 7/3/2017 I liked the Kagura return. It was intense. As for Kagome's darkness...that is awful... she should go see her mother and get a hug. |
JulyyFire chapter 7 . 7/3/2017 Alright this story is amazing! The Kagura and Kagome scene is honestly so cute despite not being able to say anything to each other. Kagome was able to gain control of herself because of her and that's just adorable! I'm not sure whether I like SangoxKagome or KaguraxKagome more. Both friendships are so emotional and great. When Sango cried over Kagome and the corpses, I was bawling. And is Kairo jealous? Ohh he definitely likes. Some competition for inu? Great fic, can't wait for the next update |
Tonimeowmeow chapter 7 . 7/3/2017 Just a suggestion, you can take it how you want but just an idea, you could have kagome really tell them about how kagura is under his control, and have the rest of them secretly try to find her heart, while he thinks inu is the one keeping her pure, itll actually be her want to save kagura. Ya know helping people who need her? That really is kagomes thing so i think it would fit really well. It can keep her pure, confuse naraku, and help them free kagura so she can help them destroy naraku. Then we can have the heart breaking reunion and everyone wins! Well except naru of course lol Loving the story! Will still love it even if you dont take my suggestion. Keep up the good stuff dude 3 |
windbreaking chapter 6 . 6/30/2017 Poor Kagome... Sango and Inuyasha are so sweet to try to be understanding and nosy. The food scene was so sad. |