Ohh, cool chapter, poor Clarice though. And I liked the bit about Jono, on account of I dont know much about him to begin with, and I like the way we can know a bit more about the characters through the story.

But oh Jeezus, Mr Creed. What an idiot. *sigh* Oh well! At least we get to watch him fall in flames and be made a fool of? Right?

Right?

I have to say well done, i love your fanfics, i even went to your website and read the rest of them, i can't wait for the next chapter! you should have more reviews by the way cos this is a brill fanfic! i love also loved the way you described Wanda during the fight! PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!

Thanking you

Oh, wow! That was great! More soon?

No, I take it back. There we go, there it is.

So, you've dicided to be really teasing and dont actually *show* us the video themselves, just what they are?

That's really stinky. :( I wanna see them! How am I supposed to wait around for them? *sigh* I dont cope with waiting well, I'm probably gonna go crazy and stick peanuts up my nose now.

But I do look forward to watching them when they are put up :D

Woah.

Gotta love them battle scenes ;) *jumps around excitedly* An update! Wohoo! I love these stories! *hugs herself* You two rock so much!

:( And I did look, but I couldnt see the link, I saw the update saying there were videos... But.. Nothing. I'll go check again though

thats a sweet fic, i hope you keep going with it. and thank you for not making pyro a psycho! i think its like one out of a hundred fics where the guy actually seems sane. good job. -

I wish he was back in bed, too. ::snort:: Your characterization is ten times better than most of us could hope to achieve. It's like the show, but not animated, and considerably more interesting. ::thumbs up::

Lol, cool. Glad that this is up and running again.

Wait, what was I saying? You only updated this not that long ago. Not that I'm complaining or anything!

well, this reveiw doesn't make much sense. But what I'm trying to say, is that I love *all* of you and (your sister?) Kitten's work, artwork included. :)